Reviews for Tales of Free Falling
Dragonna chapter 2 . 3/19
I love Yuri here because he says something very true: he has NEVER promised to keep the secret forever.
He kept it for Flynn during the whole mess post-Zaude (his friend didn't need that at this point) and he wanted probably let sodia be honest by herself.
But she has been a coward and she has not do what he suggered him to do.
She couldn't be the person that Flynn trusted the most if she didn't tell him the truth about Zaude.
Anf Yuri probably feared that one day, she could do worse than that.
Not to menton that lying to Flynn must have been hard to him.

And see Sodia being ok with she has done? Live peacefully without intentions to tell anything? of course he has been done!

Yeah the problem is that she regret it more because she knows that it had hurted Flynn (and that it would have been worse if Yuri was dead) than because she felt bad to have hurted Yuri. Maybe she regrets it more because it has failed and that Yuri remembers what she has done.

I doubt that she could have stabbed him again.
Last time, it was because he didn't except it. And that he turned his back to her until the last moment.

She has ruined her own life by herself.
Now she has to deal with it by herself.
She has lost Flynn forever, he'll never forgive her.

Flynn has been so petty here XD
Telling Estelle a part of the truth without telling the truth XD

I love the relation between yuri and estelle here, I see them like spirituel siblings. The family that Yuri has never had. and he needs it. he really needs it!
Yuri has the bad habits to keep things for himself. And it makes him suffer é_è

at least Estelle's powers has healed more or less the wound, and I suppose that Duke has healed it too. But yeah Estelle has probably not doing it in a VERY powerful way like she would have done if she knew!

Flynn and Estelle love Yuri so MUCH
He really need to 100% understand it!

ok Yuri deserved THAT but whoa Flynn, that's so brutal XD
And Estelle is awesome, I told it?
"You hit the captain Schwann :O" Flynn please XD

The hug was adorable )
These three are adorables )
Dragonna chapter 1 . 3/19
yes
One day this secret was going to be discovered.
I can see why Yuri doesn't want to keep it for himself, especially that sodia doesn't seem to have a lot of remorses and doesn't seem ready to tell the truth to Flynn.
Yuri doesn't want to keep lies in his relation with Flynn and it's normal. They're too close, one day the commandant would have felt something.
I love the discussion. Flynn is so real in his feelings of surprise, horror, anger and he's totally right to be furious at yuri for not have told him sooner. He trusted Sodia and it's a hard betrayal.

And when flynn understands that sodia did it out of jealousy? has tried to kill the most important person in his life...by jealousy? and has lied to him for weeks/months after by not telling it? I sees why he's so furious. Sodia deserved it.

It wouldn't happened if she had been honest. ( but post-Zaude, before Yuri's return, Flynn could have be even more furious...kinda)

And now Estelle knows.

Be prepared Yuri XD
Ornery Otter chapter 2 . 12/22/2016
3 I like the story. Also yay for angry hugs? I like how Estelle is portrayed, too.
Silver-Snow-77 chapter 2 . 12/24/2014
This...I empathized with all of them...not so much with Sodia, but the amount of understanding into her side of the story I gained reading this surprised me. I nearly cried, damn you. And the ending had me laughing, which was a welcome feeling after all the angst and drama I've read in this and your other stories today.
Kjelfalconer chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
My feeeeeeeeels! All my feeeeeels! I'd like to type something coherent, but my hands are all flaily and spazzy with feels, and it's 3am, and I should be asleep, and I'm really not coherent right now, and FEEEELS!

But everyone was so in character, and it was all so plausible, and Sodia was almost kind of an understandable human being (even if she does need a good slap) and, and *flail*
Double-Gemini chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
This was awesome! I would really love if you continued it (maybe in another one-shot?) about the rest of the gang finding out. I have a feeling that Rita would probably wind up hurting Yuri the most (via fireball to the face) and Karol would probably get really depressed.
Phantom Thief of the Stars chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
When I read this I saw a level of Yuri and Flynn's friendship I had never even contemplated. It also makes me wonder how each of the others reacted to Yuri's confession. You did great!
DaughteroftheRedKing chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
THIS IS ADORABLE!
damn I loved this...though I was totally expecting Sodia to stab Yuri again.
Ah, hell yeah! Sodia tries to stab Yuri and then Flynn comes and sees and then...
I don't even know.
But yeah. AWESOME!
Aquaticalunate chapter 2 . 9/6/2012
This story was excellent. I enjoy all the characters and the character portrayals were real accurate. I enjoyed Yuri seeing himself in Sodia it serves a good warning on what he could be if he doesn't watch himself. What I enjoyed most about this story is the character relationships. At the end of the story I had a strong impression of friendship between Flynn, Yuri, and Estelle.
Suspicious Popsicle chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Oh my God, I...I kind of love you for this. This is amazing. It's really good to find a story that takes a good look at the complexities of Yuri & Flynn's relationship. Plus, I don't remember having read one where Sodia's attempt on his life actually bothered Yuri to the extent it does here. Everyone feels really well fleshed-out.
DeathLadyShinigami chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
I never liked that Sodia got off completely scott free, and you kept her in character!
I think the punishment was very appropriate, and it wasn't done as a personal vendetta which makes this a complete win. XD

I also really liked the touch of Flynn's 'revenge' on Yuri (sicking Estelle on him, that made my day!) X3
Suguelya chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Hm...honestly, there isn't much to complain about, almost nothing even.
The quantity of dialogues and descriptions are well balanced and you stay quite close to the character's personalities. The flow of actions isn't rushed nor too extended, details and thoughts always enjoyable to read :)
The only little flaw I noticed was that you sometimes suddenly switch between present and past tense, which is a recurring mistake for most authors but slightly confusing at times (I'm as bad myself ._.). Apart from that, it was really good!
I liked how Yuri cares about Flynn's projects with Sodia by his side, there were really logical thoughts. And Flynn's passionate, fiery temper's always loved x)
Keep on like this ;3
wasabi chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
this is awesome. i love this because in all the fics i've read, Flynn would forgive Yuri for his sins after Yuri confessed that he's not worthy and Sodia is, but this is the first one I've read that Flynn actually dismissed Sodia.

Can't wait for the next part!