| Reviews for The Victor and His Bride |
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  Guest chapter 40 . 8/9/2017 You don't know me or care but I just read your story and loved it. I know it has 2 years since you last updated it but please keep going. #Lovethestory |
 Cute-but-psycho824 chapter 40 . 5/13/2017 When you realise the story hasn't updated in like 1 yr and a half... |
| InLoveWithClatoLove chapter 40 . 2/8/2016 WOAHHHHHH DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING! This story is amazing amazing amazing! Please pleas update it! |
| Ashigirl3040 chapter 40 . 12/23/2015 OMG, OMG! Why was Lexi choking Clove? Could u please update I wanna hear more about Cato and Clove. I loved this sooo much! |
| Oli chapter 40 . 12/18/2015 I love this fic SO MUCH! I really hate cliffhangers too, so more would be fantastic! I get why you might not post for abit more, because of exams then Christmas and new year then more school/college, but please please please please please please please please please find some time to update :) I will even give you a virtual cookie and you get more if you update relatively soon! (::) |
| Guest chapter 40 . 12/8/2015 Update! I need to know why Lexi's choking her! Why would you do this to me! |
| Guest chapter 39 . 11/29/2015 Yay! I'm so glad you updated. Please continue writing; it is a great story and I'd hate to watch it die without ending. |
| xXSlytherinsQueenXx chapter 39 . 11/29/2015 When I saw the update I was absolutely speechless. I had nearly given up on checking it and rereading in hope of a new chapter. But here it is! It was amazing! I can't wait to see what you have in store for the rest of the story! |
| Guest chapter 38 . 9/6/2015 Please update! I love this story and would hate to see it go to waste. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/8/2015 Actually Annie Cresta won the 70th Hunger Games |
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/18/2015 Love the story! Just wanted you to know that annies games were the 70th! |
| Editor chapter 38 . 1/12/2015 I'm a bit of a harsh editor and critic, just a warning here. A few things to address. All the characters are too fairytale character like, too perfect. You need more villains. Secondly, make at least one to five characters die. Not only does it tear up your audience, it gives you a reason to show some character development. Suzanne killed off Rue, Finnick and even PRIM. It only made her story more emotional, better. Finally, they are way OOC here. They're basically lambs. I want to see confrontation, I want to see tigers. these suggestions will continue |
| Guest chapter 32 . 11/8/2014 I love your oc's. When I was rereading Catching Fire I was like "Where's Lexi, and Andy, and Hunter!" and "Why did Cash and Gloss die?!" |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2014 UPDATE PLEASE! |
| CatoClove3 chapter 32 . 11/3/2014 This chapter was mega funny! |
