Reviews for Ashes of Life |
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DaddyKuns chapter 1 . 11/10/2013 Beautiful story. It made me sad all over again for the way the game ended...regardless of what ending I choose. You really know how to elicit emotion with your writing. Great job. |
CdB55 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013 Wow. So well done. |
Trayion chapter 1 . 6/2/2013 Nooooo, please do a sequel, please? Like this, it is too much heartbreak, so heartfelt, and sincere, really good, I have a gift for words (in my humble opinion). Do not ever stop ;-) |
ChocolateTruffles chapter 1 . 4/21/2013 Very touching. One thing though, how did the journal survive the original Normandy's destruction? (Sorry if its a buzzkill question but I am quite intrigued). |
skyeward chapter 1 . 12/15/2012 My feels. :( Beautifully done. |
sherryE chapter 1 . 12/3/2012 Definitely soul wrenching. |
harlee everywhere chapter 1 . 10/13/2012 Wow. What a wonderful story. Painfully sweet. The unwritten stories that the diary tells are very powerful. I’m looking forward to reading more of your stories. Thank you sharing |
XsilverXdoeX chapter 1 . 9/16/2012 Loved this story. I like that it's pretty much canon, and Liara and femShep are my otp. Great work! |
jay8008 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012 Thank you for punching me in the stomach about thirty times. Reading this was kind of horrific. I need to go be extremely sad now. |
Ily18 chapter 1 . 9/7/2012 Dear author, this story was amazing and written in a fantastic way. I loved all those flashback of Liara and Shep, but what really hit me right in the feels were the parts with the diary and Liara reading the entries. They were perfect and I loved how Shep stopped writing as soon as Liara was by her side once again. Since you didn't mention what kind of choice your Shep made, can we hope you chose Destroy with Shep surviving and therefore you decide to write a sequel with Liara and Shep meeting again on Thessia? Pretty please? Anyway, I loved it and I'll definitely read more of your stories about this pairing! |
LT chapter 1 . 9/5/2012 Ga! So sad. Very well written and I like the journal entries spaced out but - ;-; |
raginrogue chapter 1 . 9/4/2012 Okay now that pulled on my heart strings... *tears up* Amazing man. |
Theodur chapter 1 . 9/3/2012 Well, that was quite magnificent. The ending is certainly a real punch in the gut, wonderfully delivered. Of course, Liara is still so frighteningly young that she will eventually move on, but at the moment everything is so painful and raw that I can understand her feeling that she will never let go of Shepard. Some great writing here. :) |
surfergirl3537 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012 Beautifully sad. I admit I shed a few tears especially at the ring part. |
Exar Kun IV chapter 1 . 9/2/2012 Amazing well written. The diary adds a very personal touch from shepard. Lets us see what she thinking and feeling. If this is a taste of things to come. Im going to enjoy this a lot Looking forward to see what come next. |