Sorry for adding another strange review but I just remembered I also liked the first chapter! It was a good way of making the story interesting from the beginning and I got really high expectations! Since I didn't say anything of this chapter I thought you should know that I liked it too ;)

I truly liked chapter 2, with the emotions. I wished that chapter would have been longer or that you could have continued the emotions for a little bit longer at least. But still a very good chapter! I also liked chapter 3, but it could have been a bit more emotions. Chapter 4 was fine, it was good that you took a turn and something a bit new happened. I mean you like different things and I' not complaining or anything, but I especially liked the second and third chapter in this story! :)

Now, that was lovely ;)

Oh, they're just sooo... cute. Adorable. Perfect.
Really.
Thanks for sharing this story!

And finally, understanding.

Ok, that first kiss was hot.

Wow, that is a powerful thought. It makes me wonder if the reason just seeing him and hearing him isn't enough to prove he is really there is because he saw him and heard him constantly in his mind when Sherlock really wasn't there.

Love it! Adorable.

very in character and the intimacy was fantastic

Oh! Not fair! Wanted to see that scene!

Mmm, nice! Cute "first time" story - I love those! Good song choice too!

Haha oh man. Your portrayal of Sherlock was just too bloody adorable for his own good.

Smiling and Chuckling! This last part is the Best! John's dangling "carrot" tempting and taunting Sherlock all day! :-D :-D Just Perfect!

Love it!

oh i can not believe you ended that chapter there, like that! cruel! so, so cruel.