Reviews for Erotic Encounters |
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DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 1 . 2/21/2016 INCREDIBLE |
Arisu-ArtnFics chapter 1 . 2/24/2015 I like it... :D :D it's was something that I wasn't expecting... but I really like it... they are so cute together... and they didn't rush, it was perfect... :3 :3 |
narusakufansforlife chapter 1 . 12/23/2013 love it |
Crazy-Hime chapter 1 . 3/31/2013 Woah... I sure have a pretty good laugh in this story. And it was also sweet. Congratulations and Thanks! |
Lady Spain chapter 1 . 1/5/2013 Aww super sweet! I thought this was going to be rated M but its so much better |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2012 I guess I agree with you. I liked all of it except the ending. The cutsey ending with Sasuke realizing he never wanted to let Naruto go somehow didn't fit. I think since the fic was about two guys who met at a sex shop, it needed a quirkier ending. Maybe something to make us laugh, or maybe if you'd thrown in a little twist at the end. BTW, was wondering if Gaara originally took Naruto to the sex shop on purpose because he thought Sasuke might be Naruto's type? (It was odd for Gaara to bring such an unwilling Naruto to the sex store with him and then to spend so much time there when what he really wanted was the first thing he saw. Maybe he kept trying to give Naruto the opportunity to check out Sasuke?) Also thought it would've been funny if Naruto and Sasuke talked about the fact that neither of them like sex toys/sex shops and their connections to Jiraya/Kakshi. |
nat dawg chapter 1 . 10/29/2012 I really liked the story, and the ending was OK, but it could have been a bit better. You're supposed to be doing homework? Me too. |
Mizuki Inuzuka chapter 1 . 10/13/2012 awwwwwwwwwww love it! |
lil joker 1989 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012 This was a really good story :) |
fangirlandiknowit chapter 1 . 9/12/2012 This was really funny and cute:D |
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 9/10/2012 That was awesome, amusing, and excellent, I loved it and nice job but I can't wait for the next one |
Akira Nishikawa chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 lovely *_* Thanks! |
sasgay chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 i really like the beginning of this but the ending i dont like much but it's a great story, really! |
Hitomi uchiha24 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 great chapter i love how it ending to can't wait until you update |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2012 I'm not very happy with the ending of this and this story would have been a lot better if it was rated m and had m rated content but its still a good story |