this is beautiful /primes

Masterpiece. You write a hilarious fic, full of ingenious mischief and mayhem, the whole "coming out of the closet" scene (that was brilliant, he wrote on the walls just to make a point!), and then as the reader sits back thinking "what an enjoyable, light-hearted story", there's that last sentence. I was just thinking, "Wow this is so funny! Wait, did I miss something? That last sentence... He dies. WELL HOLY SHIT, THAT WAS JUST A TAD DRAMATIC, WASN'T IT?! THANK YOU FOR CRUSHING MY SOUL WITH ONE WELL-WORDED SENTENCE AND ABSOLUTELY ZERO WARNING." Hats off to you for one of the best-placed, most shock-inducing, shortest dramatic twists I have ever seen. Bravo.

Even with the last sentence, I still find this fic completely hilarious.
My two favorite moments:
Thor already knowing about getting Loki to promise things with logical statements. Must come from playing with him so much. He's pretty much the only one who understands Loki.
And Loki's describing why girls were more fun to play with than boys, with the epic finish.
Awesome.

Dude, seriously? I mean, I am loving the bittersweetness of the different stories. Feeling such an immense pride for kid Loki, at all the ages; at Thor for obviously knowing how you speak to Loki; for Tony and his rebellious streak. Feeling such sadness for parents that fail to fully understand, although they try.
And then you add the last sentence. *sighs*
This series will kill me, will it not?

Okay, that is not okay.

You make it a wonderful fic that actually has me smiling and then you end it like THAT?! Whhhyyyyy?

Nonetheless, it was beautifully written, as always :)

I wish I had that talent for writing that you do 3

THE LAST LINE OH MY GOD WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO ME

.OUT OF THE CLOSET. EVER XD
Wait, what!?. Why Loki is death!? How, when, why!?

*flails about in bathroom near tears* Gods, couldn't you just let me be Fucking happy?! I was smiling and joyful, ready to go to bed Nd dream happy dreams and then I read the last freaking sentence and the smile melts from my face like watercolors on a soaking canvas and just DAMN IT!

*ahem* now that that bit of drama is over, I loved this. I can just picture little Loki standing up in front of his whole family and found that. *snicker*

Is there any chance At all that Loki is alive? Maybe a doctor rushes in with blood and they save home just is time? Or anything, anything, please?

;A; I cry myself to sleep after reading your work, but I love it!

- Bandon

Okay, that last line bitch-slapped me SO hard. It should apologize. I just realized that you write like, all of my favorite FanFics. I never even knew that. I was reading "Enough" when I noticed that it hinted at words being powerful for Loki when it introduced Baldr. So I checked out your profile and yup, you write that awesome one. Write On!

I’ve read a lot of stories, small novellas and Fan fiction that just went on and on and this is by far the best set of stories I’ve ever read. I love math, the concept of it and you are simply blowing my mind. I’ve read all your stories (I’m obsessed it’s unhealthy, really.) first-class job, and congrats because this was absolutely fantastic.

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another one! *o*

I love it!

You just HAD to remind me of Lokis death in the ending, didn't you? *sniffles* ;_;
Beautifully written, it was nice to see Odins train of thought - I think it's the first time I read a fic like this :)
Wonderful work, as always! :3

I have an unbelievable amount of love for this verse. I just reread all three (after you killed me with this last line), and I love them even more each time I read them (and send them to friends shouting "Read this!").

I look forward to the next part of the series!

*dies*

This is me from the grave. YOUR ENDING KILLED ME :((