I think I understand what you mean by OOC-ness. I found Alistair's response with questions (repeating what Elissa said) to be OOC, but this story and its end was so sweet that it really is a minor detail! Loved the way you wrote Alistair's feelimgs and the whole situation is very possible! Loved this sweet fluff 3

So, so sweet

Another very sweet story. Loved it. Whatever OOC-ness there might be on Alistair's part is forgotten with how well the story fits together. Equal parts funny and romantic.

Aww such a sweet story! Really enjoyed reading it :)

Aww :D Cute. I like how you use lines from the game and add them to their conversation.

This was *very* sweet. I loved it.

I really enjoyed your story, it's well written, has believable dialogue and does a great job of setting the scene and presenting the characters in a believable way. Your description of the weather was so good, I actually felt a sorry for them, camping in those conditions! There's a great balance of humor and awkwardness. I saw on your author page that you were new to the fandom, welcome to the Funny Farm! I have been a fan for a couple of years now but I recently started replaying DA:O again and it made me crave good Alistair fanfic. I feel lucky to have found a good one so darn fast, so thank you for that! Good stories like this make me feel guilty for giving up on my story :P Hopeflully this will be a kick in the pants.

Ah, that was very sweet. :) Like Alistair to take the lead for once, although it mind seem OOC. But he is a man and we can't say for sure what happens when a half dressed woman is pressed against him willingly. He must have some instincts that the chantry didn't kill.

one word: Awwww!

Loved this! It was so sweet and fluffy. So much so, we're all going to get cavities. lol. ;)

Aww this was sweet.

You captured Alistair perfectly.

Love the story. Nice, gentle, and, like a good pastry, not too sweet.

Aww, this brightened my day! :)