This is great! The only thing you might have missed is that Zidane was an actor and a thief too, not just a "professional flirt" (It's on DFFOO).

I'm dead.

By laughing to much.

Breaking the fourth wall joke is never get old.

THAT WAS FUNNY! I love mix ups of my favorite games that change the normal atmosphere. I loved the play very mch especially when lightning scolded Squall. I cohld just imagin how it went. o.0

nah dont push it,we have all seen how cloud is dressed like a girl in FF7 and that guy choose him over aries and tifa,i bet being tied up is much less embarrassing than that

I liked the story ive read so updating as quickly as possible but dont rush is one problem that is most of the time cant tell which charecter is speaking i suggest u should put some kind of indidcations when someone is speaking

Okay, the story is making me laugh a bit too much. Although, as a major Cloud fan, I can't agree with the idea of him being 'tied up' by anyone, even Lightning. If anything, I picture Cloud giving Light a glare and the two have a sort of glaring contest and then they just move on.

And the whole fiasco concerning Warrior of Lights real name is something even I'm trying to figure out. I still can't figure it out.

Anyways, this story is going great right now.

Okay, so you introduced the characters HERE, I see. Well, i must say that this is a major improvement. But you might really want to separate the different times more efficiently. You should have it in parenthesis and have those vertical lines that separate the storylines.

Anyways, I really like the idea of how they make the play of the Dissidia game into the play. Very creative.

Alright, I FINALLY managed to get time to myself. Sorry for the long wait. Either way, here's to the review:

...I'm gonna be honest. I got lost practically on the first line here. I mean, it just seem like there are so many random things that just appeared out of nowhere and suddenly, there's a play. You also sort of neglected to introduce the characters to us. Sure, we KNOW who they are, but I feel as if everything was rushed and such. And there were some problems with the spelling and grammar here and there, but now everywhere.

I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but I don't want to lie to you and say things that I don't have full confidence in. That would be even crueler of me, so I'll be honest with you. I feel like you should read the chapter yourself and tell me what you feel. Do you see anything wrong with it and such, or is it just me?

I'll keep reading on and give you as much advice in a review as I can.

One word "LOL" XD Can't stop laughing ;)
Keep the good job. .d

Oh that's why i think that Lightning personality is kinda familiar, nonetheless it still fit her good job

man this is fuckin hilarious,i,ve never seen a story this good since Dissidia Random Life of Madness or something like that but they stoped updating after a few chapters i wonder if it will happen to this one,keep updating as quickly as you can all the jokes were great especially breaking the forth wall reference