I’m sad you’re not continuing the story :(

Thank you for putting up a summary! I really enjoyed reading this series!

Like the story! Pls update soon!

This seems really interesting!

Nooooooo
I fucking loved this. I understand your reasons though

Found this fic today (I'm new in the fandom, sue me!) and read it in one go.
Phew. As your writing style probably changed the last few years and this story is abandoned anyways, I don't think criticism would be appreciated.
So instead, I'll just thank you for allowing us the pleasure of reading this fine piece. Thanks.

To other reviewers: Plesse stop badgering LeFay about updates. It's abandoned and unless her Muse suddenly goes crazy (which dies NOT magically happen through the power of reviews) it will probably stay that way.

I'm sad that you didn't finish the story but you continue doing new ones,can u please try to finish it. If not then maybe have some else finish it, it's one of the best stories that I want to finish reading. If you can that would be amazing if not then sorry for bugging you, it's a great story, I love it.

I think you just condemned the story to death.

All this fluff has me wondering if the story is going anywhere.

I have not shipped Ed and Taylor more the minute they started to make out! *happy fangirl squeal* THIS IS EVEN BETTER THAN WHEN THEY KISSED THE FIRST TIME.

I started reading your fanfictions around 9th... now I'm three months away from graduating high school and about to enter college to study animation. I fell out the FMA fandom years ago (it's still close to my heart), but I suddenly remembered your fanfiction account and wondered if you ever finished the story I used to religiously refresh my email for. I honestly didn't expect that there would be a recent update after so many years but I'm so happy you did. I guess, ever after so long, I subconsciously wanted closure for Taylor, Lefay and the gang. Thank you for writing the story, and good luck finishing college!

That was the best author's note I have ever seen. Seriously.

It's sad that this fic is ending but I can understand. Im currently studying for my GRE and DAT so I'm busy too. Their is also the fact that your fic seems to get more and more complicated. How Ed and Al deal with being in the real world without any identification and the fact that they look like popular anime characters with the exact same name would be confusing. Not to mention that if Taylor get pulled back and forth through the gate then eventually the police would have started to investigate. It may not be such a big deal in Amestris but it is a problem in America. I just can't see you getting around these problems in a realistic manner.

Thanks for the fic and good luck at school

This has to be the best Omake ever!

I'm really sorry you can't continue this story. I just recently discovered it and actually just finished it. But college is hectic and life goes on. I understand why you stopped it and I really like the summary. What you had going there was really interesting. I'm not gonna lie thou, I was a huge sucker for Taylor's and Ed romance. I was wondering if you could do like an epilogue. Just kinda here is how they are now happily ever after (or not? Up to you) sorta deal. Just as kinda some real closure you know. If you don't want to that is perfectly fine by me. I will not complain, just thought I'd make a request. But if you do I would be really happy and appreciate it.