Solid start now where is the next page button

Since the very beginning, I saw a great potential in this story, and I believed it would be so good that I read it all in one day. It's now late at night, and I am tired, but I can't just leave this story without a review.
I'm not disappointed at all in how this turned out to be. I was always curious about what would happen of Bardock was good and wanted to defeat Frieza, and your story is just what I was looking for. In true DBZ fashion, it's taking its sweet time to get through it all, but I can't say that's a bad thing.
I like how you're trying to keep it as close to canon as possible. Not many fanfiction writers do. I can see it's a difficult process, so I'm impressed that you want to go though so your story will look authentic. I like your foreshadowing, with his visions and whatnot. It gives me something I can think about after I'm done reading, wondering "What could that have meant?"
Your descriptions of the fights are very good too, though sometimes it can be kinda boring to read them because well, they're fights and you're supposed to watch them happen. I'm not critiquing that you write them or anything, I'm just saying that it's kinda tedious to read but I know it's necessary.
Oh, and I can't wait for that faraway moment when Goku meets his father for the first time. It's going to be amazing because that's the one thing I always ask myself.. "How would he have reacted if he met his father?" Only here it's even better because it's going to be "Will he be any different from meeting his father?" because he'll see him in his teenage years, right? At the beginning of the anime, he was 12, so we can only wonder what could be..
Anyways, brilliant story that you have here. I hope you can update soon!

Love the start

Great chapter! I thoroughly enjoyed the fight and I thought Somen would return as a plot device after leaving the planet, until he blew his head off. There goes a perfectly good plot device :P. I loved the Full Power Energy Wave comment. That is so true! Plus, the switch of winning side was so professionally written. Will Bardock be learning the instant transmission? Will he return to Planet Meat? Will Goku defeat Buu with the Spirit Bomb? :P. JK! I hope you update soon, you crazy writer :P. *ruffles Vegito's hair* NZF 4 LIFE! -K

Very good.

Bardock should train to get control of the visions so they wouldn't appear in the worst situations possible, if he develops that power he could use it to predict his opponent's moves and get a great advantage in battle.

Well...shucks *rubs head in embarrassment* I've never been mentioned before...it's got a good feeling to it *smiles brightly while blushing*
Well, you know what I said before, about the chapter being good and balanced...though the ending could've been a bit more...softer in my opinion.
And do watch grammar. And capitalization. And comma placements. And-you get the idea.
〜（ゝ。）SSSS

Nice story bro! Finally Bardock survives and this survival attempt makes sense. This will be my third fav. Bardock story, keep up the good work!

This was an interesting and good chapter. It's good to see this back, really good in fact, especially because I think you write one of the best Bardocks on the site. If you don't mind, I'd like to touch on a couple of things in my review in terms of the story and formatting.

Plot wise, I like what's going on. This Bardock and Somen fight was a bit to quick, but I have a feeling that there'll be a rematch of sorts. Kick his ass, Bardock! Kick it! The whole bit about the soul was cool as well. I'm not sure if it's energy, I don't know what the hell it is, but hey, to each their own!

I've read this chapter three times, and I don't know what is, but there's something odd with the formatting. If/when I figure out what it is, I promise to PM you it. XD But, I happen to like your writing style. Do I think you could use more description? Yes. But, your story isn't a mess with giant walls of text, so I like that.

"Of course." Destiny said, as he vanished back to his own planet. That should be "Of course," Destiny said as he vanished back to his own planet. Commas go at the end of a quote if you have something like said, responded, answered etc. Commas can also go before names or in cases like this. "Yes, me." Bardock sounded agitated. You can put a comma before me. Just trying to help ya out, Vegito. XD

As I said above, I really think your Bardock is one of the better ones on the site, and hopefully we see this update soon. I'm interested to see what'll happen next. Nice chapter, Vegito.

Hi there, this is my first time posting a review so I started reading the fan fic since morning and finished now. So my question is, . . ?! I'm so hooked to this fanfic, you have to continue! Also, I know I won't get a straight answer but will Bardock become SSJ while battling Frieza or after battling Frieza?

Very interesting chapter.

Oh come now べじーと さん、you can't let Fallout get in the way of FanFiction! I let Budokai Tenchikai get ahead of my FanFiction, but it actually helps XD
Anywhose, good, solid chapter. You need to watch your comma placements, and a good question mark or too wouldn't hurt in some areas, even a good old !?
I guess all I can say is... -pulls out guitar- If you want blood...you got it! YEAH! EVERYONE!
-Cricket chirp-
...okay then, no one likes AC/DC. What if I play Nickelback?
-All the fangirls scream-
Ahaha, nice try, I'm not doing it.

Oh... My... GOD! Best chapter I have ever read! I'm totally fanboying over this! You described Destiny soooo well, Vegito. That is exactly like him. And the discussion between G. Kai and S. Kai? Amazing! Would anyone reaching a Kai be sent to Destiny to assist him? I am totally caught into the action of this chapter. Who would have known Somen was stronger than Bardock? That purple bastard! I hope pure skills on Bardock's part eill help him win the fight. I'm so glad you're back, buddy! -K

I like your story. I really do. But I'm starting to see too many TFS jokes and its taking away from the story

I am now going to follow this story thoroughly. I like Fajoka. He's cool!

Like the idea of using food names as in the original, but please, stop responding reviews in the chapter, they are longer than the chapter itself.