Awwwww this is so cute! _ i'm suprised u havent gotten heaps and heaps of reviews but i bet u will eventually because this storys great. I know it has darker underlyings and all, but it still seems lighthearted and cute and ahhhhh i so wish u wud write another chapter! lolz :)

That was really good! I don't know if you were thinking about making a sequel but i'd defiantly read it if you did :)

Oooohhhh! I really liked that. It was a very cool idea. There are a few spelling and punctuation errors, but nothing too distracting

I really liked it. :)