Lmao This was so good and smexy

That was so hot :P

It's so incredibly nice to see something like this from time to time. Most stories here are just pure unrealistic sex written by virginal 14 year old girls (at least that's what it feels like) so it makes me happy when I come by something that isn't as harsh or raw as those fics are. I haven't read many ShikaNaru stories in general, less so ShikafemNaru stories, but this was really good. Stay awesome, man.

This is the best pwp I have read. Most of them seem to be so very unrealistic and have a forced feel to there dialogue.
You did an awesome job!

Lol

OMG is there more of this? I need more of this! Cuz this is damn good and I want to know what happens next or another story of lemon goodyness ;)

I would like you to do a shino and naruko story plz that would be nice

oh wow! haha was laughing when they were caught by sai as they were about to have sex. great job! a nice lighthearted fluff for a change of pace. cant wait for whats next!

A ma zing

HAHAHHAAHH This was great!

_WarFlower

There you go, 10 reviews! I really liked this and hope to see more from you!

Yeah, remember me? Well I just wanted to let you know that if you are as good as your hentai writing is, I'm so jealous of your girl. Cheers.

wow that was different. i like it

This was extremely well-written. I like how everything seemed very authentic and that it wasn't full blown-out sex, but instead something simple and quite romantic actually. (:

woah, i liiiike! i was so sure they were going to have sex though! i'm not going to complain, it was a really good story and i like how you made it all seem very real. not always as planned is definitely the most realistic story i've come across so far.

well done!

xoxo