Cute

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you!
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Ugh Jamie is such a turd. Of course he picked a strip club.

Oh timely intervention there, shower edward!

Oh man, Bella is doing so much more than she can handle, but she's handling it, so props to her!

Thanks for writing this wonderful story!

A hand job. Boo. Crap

That was ridiculous. Let me tell you why.
First, bella going into shock because she was PUSHED is just stupid.

Second, sitting in a cold car for all of 10 minutes is not going to make you so cold that a guy needs to save you, and then take all your clothes off "to get you warm". Its not like she had fucking hypothermia.

Third, why didn't she just turn the damn car on if shes cold?

Fourth, if she really works as hard as she says, two full time jobs. She should be able to make the house payment.
Fifth, why did Edward need to "use his hands" is bella not able to pick up the wash cloth?

Sixth, If bella is conscious enough to concern herself with the state of her underwear, or to consider Edwards body in detail then shes capable enough to wash herself and not act like a whore.

Seventh, pretending you don't want to be saved when you do...well all I'm saying is that bella is fucking transparent. And if you want to push them together like you did with the weird bathtub scene, make the reasons for it believable.

I don't get why shes freaking out and calling Edward...she was pushed. Big fucking deal

Not even thirty? In chapter 3 you said he's 31.

Well, he's right to be upset. Bella messed up royally by not telling him.

Ewww. How disgusting.

Depression isn't easy to handle you know. We have seen it with Chester..rest in piece my friend...

Why couldn't you as author write Charlie the way he desserved it and not just put him away? His daughter stayed away from him even as she knows Charlie needs help in any way possible. I still can not believe that she just left him to be misserable and alone...GOD...this makes me so mad. You obviously don't know anything about a situation like Charlie's.
It really breaks my heart to imagine that situation on anyone. Charlie alone and abandoned in the house while Bella is happy with Edward.
I cried after the last few chapters. But don't flatten yourself because you got me emotional. That were not tears because of your skills but tears of the situation Charlie is in with no way out.

Loved it, such a cute story.

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