Reviews for Beginnings
aspiring icarus chapter 10 . 5/10/2016
Really cool idea. I'm really enjoying it. Please update soon.
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gima2618 chapter 10 . 3/2/2016
Nice
LovetheStory chapter 6 . 6/18/2015
First off love the story, but I felt you should know shock is a critical medical emergency, not a numb apathetic feeling only, although kudos on some of the symptoms, but those lack of feelings are because your body is starting to shut down.
Quiet Ryter chapter 10 . 5/14/2015
Thanks for updating your story. This is an awesome chapter.:) Please update your story.
FabinaForever11 chapter 10 . 5/5/2015
Awesome!:)
ArthurShade chapter 10 . 5/3/2015
Nice
Night's Finale chapter 10 . 5/3/2015
I'm so glad I've been following your stories, this one is awesome. Can't wait for you to update, no rush.
ArthurShade chapter 9 . 3/16/2015
Rather interesting if I do say so myself. Can't wait for your next chapter m
Storyholder chapter 2 . 3/15/2015
HEHEHEHEHE! I LIKE!
Storyholder chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
I have goosebumps from reading this. NICE!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/13/2015
Why no update ? :(
paola chapter 9 . 6/24/2014
good chapter, Please update your story.
Talltree-san chapter 9 . 1/15/2014
Glad to see more chappies to this story :D !
Quiet Ryter chapter 9 . 12/21/2013
Thanks for updating your story. This is an awesome chapter.:) Please update your story.
vampireharry the 2 chapter 9 . 11/22/2013
Another awesome chapter! Keep up the great work!
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