I'm riveted to this fanfiction - are you able to give an update? I've read this story many times but am saddened that it's not complete. I want to know what happens, my curiosity is piqued. Thank you for a wonderful story that needs to have a conclusion?

Jenny-I love this story-you are so gifted. Do you plan on finishing this story soon?

Noooo! What an evil cliffhanger. I'm hooked why oh why haven't you updated in so long? I'm impatiently waiting for the next update.

Oh, please tell me you are going to continue this! It is so sweet!

What a wonderful chapter. Their date was marvelous, well, except for the headaches which seem to be getting more painful for Lois. :0

Lois and Clark are both just completely adorable with their daughter. Those may be my favorite scenes. Martha is excellent as always. And I can't wait to learn more about the mysteries surrounding everything - from what's happened to Lois and why, to Chloe's death, and even to why Lois and Clark named their daughter Bitsie.

Thanks for writing!

You deserve to be shoot for the cliffie!

But this fiction is great thank!

But you should give us the next Chapter soon!

I love the Lois's mother instinct, the discovery of Superman secret identity and the Clois... The Clois... 3

I feel like I should leave a longer review, but at the moment I can't find the words to describe how beautifully written this story is, and how lovely and enjoyable you've written the Lois/Clark relationship. I truly can't understand why this doesn't have more reviews. I'm really looking forward to more of the journey.

Lovin the story. Could you maybe begin future chapters with reca

It's quick between them but I like it!
Up please!

Legendary Chapter & More Please

Great Chapter & More Please

What scary thing! Discovery of her own baby!

Good clois and good relationship between Martha&Lois.