This is lovely!

That's an interesting idea, that Dexter could be so good at acting normal that he could fool his own brother...for a while. Nice story.

This is quite good. It is always interesting to read about the "real" Brian's thoughts and you have captured his character perfectly.
Poor Brian.

3 Love it!

This is great! Love it so much! The fact that Brian would have stalked dexter through the years makes total sense, the obsession he showed for him. And then of course the realization that they were indeed the same! Ahhhh! Great job! :D

great...you should continue more and maybe put another spin on when dexter and brian finally meet

sooo great!