You write well.

Whoa, I love how you described Danny's acceptance of his ghost half. It's so...wonderful. I think this story just gave me inspiration for my own.

That was beautiful

It is fitting that i was listening to counting stars

It's interesting to see fanfics where Danny is accepting of what happened. :D

This is an amazing piece! Would it be okay with you if I posted a picture based on this? I'll definitely credit you and link to this story.

I loved reading this. Reading how Danny's very perception of everything, even something as simple as sunlight, had changed. And I found the tidbit about the built-in knowledge base he'd half-formed as a half-ghost to be fascinating. Maybe that's why he kept stepping on everyone's metaphorical toes: not only did he live in the Real World, but he had an incomplete initial knowledge base of all things ghostly. And the other ghosts didn't realize his knowledge base was incomplete, and probably didn't think to ask, so Danny had no clue how incomplete his initial ghostly knowledge base was.

Wow. That was an extremely deep thought process. Well done.

Beautifull...

Fascinating take on what happened to Danny when he changed. I can definitely imagine him up there on the ops-center, figuring things out.

Cheers,
Jimelda

I just love you description of Danny being a halfa and how he became one. Well done! :)

Great story! ;)

Wonderfully written! Your descriptions were beautifully detailed and tour words flow so nicely. I really like your writing style. Though I must admit, I follow JAMF far more than any other story, fanfiction or otherwise. I find it more amusing to read than watch smallville with my sister. I could never look at either show the same way again. Thanks for all your writing. I love how you describe Danny as a half ghost. This one shot was awesome!

Beautifully written!

This was great. I love the compare and contrast, and how you brought the two halves of Danny together.