Great stuff. To the next chapter!

An interesting beginning and the writing is good but I wonder where you will take it.

Hello, just finished fic, and its beautiful! I just want to know if I can still read the deleted scene :p

I want the deleted scene. Is it too late to ask?

I cannot express to you how wonderful this tale is, I have read it at least a dozen times since I've stumbled across it, and each time I find I love it just a little more than the last. I adore how amazingly well you have captured each character, and how beautifully this tale flows.
just simply put, very well done tale indeed. . :D

I don't know what to say. This story is truly a rare gem. So well-written, and the story is gripping. In seven years of reading MCU fan fiction, this is my first time reading a Lokane fic that realistically develops their relationship into something believable. I love all the appearances from side characters. And the lore surrounding magic and wormholes was really fascinating.

It's interesting to read this in 2019, after all that has happened in the MCU. Certain bits of this fic have parallels in the later Thor films. I know it's just a coincidence, but it's interesting in hindsight. Are you sure you don't use a crystal ball? ;)

This story was a joy to read. Thank you for writing it.

I love the scene with Fury and Steve! I could vividly hear them in my head as it played out.

I know this is an old story but I just had to comment! Such a magically written chapter and story overall. Love the creativity

Wow. Those last ten or so chapters were so beautiful in concept and implementation. I love the direction you chose to expand on the canon and the effort you put into world building. I've always been confused by how many fanfics maintain the assumption that humans can't learn to use magic. You also did such a wonderful job of evolving the characters believably. I don't know how long it took you to write this story, but you obviously improved a ton along the way. Thank you for sharing this fantastic work.

Very well doneand well planned out. This was a pleasure to read.

This is one of the BEST Loki & Jane stories I have ever read. I loved it!

I don’t think it’s possible to love this anymore than I do! Just excellent!

First of all, I really enjoy your story. It is very well written. The only thing so far that I have to criticize is Loki in Jotun form. He actually does have hair (I’m really not attracted to bald men so I had to pretend he looks like he does in the movies) and those marks are not scars, he was born with them.

This story was lovely, heart breaking and heartwarming all at the same time. I am glad I had the opportunity to read this, even if it did take three days.

Was beautiful!

Oh Jesus. What a whirlwind. This story is amazing! I love it so much