I really really loved this. Good job.

Thank you for the intense story. Hope you have a nice day.

Wish this wasn't over. You did a really great job. I rather enjoyed this serious fic. i love your funny fics, don't get me wrong, but this was just as enjoyable for different reasons.

*frantic clapping* Bravo! Oooh, I really liked this idea and the plot twists kept me reading to the very last period of the very last sentence. You certainly have a way with words! My only advice to you is perhaps to make it longer. The story felt full and yet somehow barebones. I don't know how to explain it. It's like you had sugar, spice, and everything nice but no chemical X. (I hope you get the reference XD) I think if it had been drawn out a little bit more, especially before she discovered her mother's fate, it would have been a million times more crushing. But perhaps you're like me and can only write short things...whatever the case, I enjoyed your story and thank you for contributing this wonderful gem to the fandom! ~Polaris ;)

Ok...so I've been reading this and I was like, "wow this is pretty interesting, not sure where anything is going, eh, I get it a little better now, and then HOLY CRAP WHAT THE HECK I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT IS GOING ON RIGHT NOW."

Such a cute story!

very cute!

That was a great end to a great story, thank you for writing something I really enjoyed.

Im gonna die at how cute that ending was! I am seriously going to die! DONT LET ME DIE!

Amazing! I don't typically like AU stories, but you managed to pull it off beautifully. Great job!

Awww it's awesome

Is it over?! It can't be! It was too short! :)

Awwww

That was a cute story

It's over.. ;( That was a nice touch to it... How about an Epilogue..?! :) Just how life carrying on between them all. Maybe Ayame shows around for Kouga. ;) Kagome and Inuyasha announcing their future first child! That'd be sweet. .