Reviews for MagicJutsusLoveFun!
Cyber-Kanochi chapter 1 . 5/17/2019
Just so you know the names are Japanese an their for Susuke, Naruto, Kakashi, and Sakura are they’re first names and Urchiha, Uzumaki, Hatake, and Hurano are they’re respective last names
jallison099 chapter 4 . 8/26/2015
I love this story so much
jallison099 chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
I can't wait for the next chapter coming up love it
RPerson chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
THIS IS NOT A FLAME. IT'S LONG, BUT IT'S NOT A FLAME.
Just a few corrections:
• Harry has black hair and green eyes
• Kakashi/Nina has black/dark brown eyes (not entirely sure which)
• Draco Malfoy definitely DOES NOT HAVE BLACK HAIR. It's a sort of pale blonde, I think.
• Argent means 'silver, or silvery-white'. So, you probably mispelled a word in that part, 'cause it definitely doesn't make sense it the sentence you used. I suppose you could use that word to define Draco's hair though.
• Three years since Sasuke/Mizuki came back? The Fourth Shinobi World War happened when Naruto & Co. were 16-17 years old, it's also when Sasuke helped the Shinobi Alliance. You mentioned earlier that Sasuke/Mizuki was 18. Based of the canon, if it's been three years already since Sasuke/Mizuki decides to protect Konoha, Team 7 should already be 19-20, Kakashi/Nina already in his/her 40s. If that's so, Sasuke's supposedly travelling the world, not living in Konoha, and Kakashi became the 6th Hokage, not part of an ANBU team. If this is an AU of some sort, it would have been better to say that in the summary or in an AN.
kiroigenaya chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
I'm terribly sorry,but you are the first person to receive a 'flame' from me.
this flame is about the names of team seven. you do know that hatake,uzumaki,and uchiha are their LAST NAMES?! not their FIRST NAMES?!...don't you?
it just makes no sense to change their last names into girl names instead of their first names.
sorry for the flame.
cfaithcsf chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Uzumaki, Uchiha and Haruno are their lasts names not first
naraku chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
harry has green eyes and black hair and kakashi eye is black and ron last name is spell wrong
ultima-owner chapter 2 . 1/4/2013
Draco got the 'Hm' treatment...I hope Draco gets it most of the time
Flames of Nocturne chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Okay, where to begin?
While I did injoy the concept ( :p ) it needs some work. How old and how far in the naruto plot are your fender-bender team 7? Uzumi was a bit mature, so I'm thinking more towards the end of the fourth who obj war. But that only brings more questions, if the war isn't over then how did fem-sasuke come back? Where was the "what will happen to the rest of our friends" angst? The suspicion? The infamous ninja paranoia that even naruto would have? Everything just went a bit too smoothly even if you place it in Harry Potter's first year. And there was no real build up of the orochimaru/uzumi conflict, did he try to curse her instead of fem-sasuke? Or is it a near occurrence fear? Or did it really happen but an AU isolated event?
In short the thing you need is details.
kitty tokyo uzumaki chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I'm sort of interested. Please update this soon! Oh and
it's Weasley not Wizaly. And was it a mistake that you
put Harry's eyes as blue? 'Cause their green. If you
want I could beta for you.