Reviews for Guilty Cloud
Midnight49 chapter 5 . 8/11/2019
The Shroud of Shadows is basically the one from Xioalin Showdown with the added benefit of controlling shadows and darkness. Either way other than that I Love this chapter!
Po1 chapter 2 . 7/25/2019
Don't waste your time. This is cannon with slightly different abilities. Big changes made in the background, but somehow everything progresses as cannon would.
Raskator chapter 9 . 2/18/2019
The strings of fate don't sound appropriate. The marronettes strings sound plausable because with an name like strings of fate would have been something so OP it defys fate
XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 10/13/2018
A womans wrath... IS THAT A CODE GEASS REFERENCE?
monsterkillers124 chapter 17 . 8/19/2018
this was interesting hope for more
sayan.biswasbml.9 chapter 6 . 5/30/2018
void rasengan it's sound like very powerful.
BorderLand chapter 4 . 1/16/2018
Well, he has good chances of being Raikage that's for sure.

He is already a new level of badass and he is only 13.
BorderLand chapter 1 . 1/16/2018
Goddamnit this is great, a pink haired girl that is the opposite of Sakura in every way is all that Naruto could ask for from a girlfriend.
primoishere02 chapter 17 . 11/28/2017
This is some good shit man. I hope you gonna continue this story.
Arc-Angel-Of-Fire chapter 17 . 10/29/2017
more please.
M chapter 17 . 7/22/2017
Please update this soon
DoomMarine55 chapter 1 . 4/9/2017
A look another lame story with the idiotic cliched contrivance of Naruto being neglected in favor of his fictional sister that all unoriginal hack authors use with pretentions of being a "gray" (whatever that means) story about conflict that's just a lazy retread of the cross over materials plot that does nothing but turn Naruto into some one-dimensional edge lord gary-stu. You're a shit writer with no talent.
scaryorange chapter 2 . 12/18/2016
There can only be one person with the Genome m8, don't ruin your story.
TheBlackEntity chapter 1 . 10/20/2016
Plz update this.
Emperor-Aurora chapter 7 . 9/18/2016
Yeah no. Fuck off Kishimoto lover.
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