Reviews for Fragile Harmony
Nihil Asara chapter 2 . 7/5
Huh? is this even the same story as the previous chapter? It's like, wtf bananas?
Not-Quite-Old Man chapter 2 . 4/22
Ok. I am so confused... is this like the whole Star Wars thing where it starts in the middle of the story? I have no idea who anyone was and I don't know any of their motives, personalities, backstories, etc. Normally I don't mind OC's but getting dropped into the middle of a conversation between them and having to try to figure out what was going on even right out the gate wasn't very fun. Especially if them seem like important characters in some fashion. That and trying to figure out where there story was taking place (and which version of the league this was) didn't help. Also, judging by how Kazumi mentioned Obito, I'm guessing thats femNaruto. Either way, as someone picking up this story for the first time, it kinda felt like I stepped off the side of the pool and instantly fell into the deep end. Even more so with how different (which not neccesarily a bad thing!) Kazumi's abilities are.
Branwen Yang chapter 2 . 3/1
OMG YOU'RE NERFING HER HOW DARE YOU?! Obviously I'm being sarcastic, I mean think about it the Juubi is a creature said to be the end of the world and you expect her to go all out against weaklings? I mean think about it Kaguya fuses with the God tree and then becomes this Senjutsu monster said to have powers that can destroy the world and you think anything besides Darkseid is a reason to use her full strength?
tiago.dbz69511 chapter 26 . 7/10/2019
Interesante historia. Por favor continĂșa.
koseta.a chapter 2 . 6/16/2019
Moves way to fast and lacks detail.
Abhichatlevi chapter 26 . 2/10/2019
Great!...plz continue
Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 12/25/2018
A sad start...
NatsuGooner chapter 3 . 7/30/2018
I thought she was the new Juubi? She should be steamrolling her enemies if that's the case.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2018
Naruto and Izombie spread the word
GhettoZorcress chapter 4 . 1/28/2018
IM SO CONFUSED! WERE'S NARUKO?!
Snipern0sniping chapter 25 . 11/26/2017
I'm disappointed. I was expecting an omake teaching wonder woman the birds and the bees.

Enjoyable story apart from that. \'-'/
Mathew5641 chapter 25 . 11/23/2017
I love your story it's very entertaining especially the Omakes this one though made me laugh so hard I cannot wait to see what you do next keep up the amazing work

May we meet in the halls of Valhalla
Angel4EverLostInLife chapter 25 . 10/22/2017
More please!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/3/2017
Don't make up random people and change her name so much it's annoying rewrite it don't make it so confusing
Kminari chapter 4 . 8/13/2017
I did not like this chapter, I like history ... and I hate it, at times. This chapter I did not like at all, I find one of the most stupid things to reveal information as important when it is not totally necessary, that information about her past can be used to do a lot of evil, she practically announces how her powers work.

I like Samehada more than kubikiribocho, but good choice of sword.

Excellent way to finish the chapter.
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