Wow, this was just perfect. I love how you changed the sports and yet everyone stays the same. The writing and characterization was superb, definitely one of my favorite stories!

This story is absolutely fantastic; I love it. I cracked up when I read the omake. Nice job :3

Uhm. I think perhaps you accidentally uploaded a different story into this place. Because this is definitely smut and it's nothing about soccer...? (:

JESUS CHRIST! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE LOVE THIS FIC! I WANT TO MARRY IT! that's creepy O.o BUT ITS TRUE! You should make a sequal with the picture and everyone finding out and them supporting them but shinooka's friends messing with Mihashi and Abe saving him or something like that...just a thought though. Like I said before though LOVE LOVED IT! YOUR SUCH AN AWESOME WRITER! THANK U SOOOOO MUCH! :) XD

Cute cute cute! XD I love Abe and Mihashi, and soccer surprisingly works for them too.

Haha, and Tajima at the end was just sooo fun. I bet they'll be glad they have it, you know, after Abe calms down from his murderous pursuit of him...

Uwah. Sorry for taking so so long to review this. No matter what, I didn't want to rush reading it and leave a half-assed review. I wanted to take my time reading it so I can leave a proper comment :) I must say, your characterization in this fic was pulled off really well! Very impressive, considering it was a soccer AU, yet even though soccer is a completely different sport from baseball, once I started reading it didn't feel like AU at all anymore. And wow... you really did your research. From soccer, to the Japanese festival. Your writing was so vivid that even if I wasn't in a real Japanese festival myself, it felt like I went to one after reading this. And Tajima, my beloved Tajima. You wrote him so well, for all the cute and crazy little boy that he is XD Over all, great job! For such a well-written work to be dedicated to me, and on a series I love so much, words can't express how grateful I am. I kept a copy of this so I can read it again whenever I feel like it. :D

hee hee! it's so fluffy! I loved reading it. I'm kinda, like, giggling over due to fluffiness.

I really like your idea and you executed it very well. The transition of the character's baseball position to soccer is also handled very well. Makes me wanna have Oofuri have an AU omake like this. You really did your research. GG! .

Grammar's also A-OK for me. Choice of words are good. Storyflow is also good. I really can't find any to nitpick...

Anyway, if you're going to keep writing, you still have more room to grow! Keep up the good work!