I dislike how damn helpful he's being it's annoying it's like he's blaming himself for people's deaths like wtf what arrogance

Eh why is it abandoned lol

Damn, I actually really wanted to read what happens next! The juicy drama between Naruto and Asuna would’ve been DELICIOUS! I’m always a sucker for relationships taking a dramatic turn, whether they be for good or for ill.

I guess I can only wait... TT

Ughh fuck kirito little bitch

Update! So good

Thanks for great story. Just passing fan of Naruto x over. Waiting Nex chapter.

I like the SwordArt online series as a whole but the portrayal of Kirito made me dislike him because he couldn’t do anything wrong, and nobody could beat him, and he had a bunch of cheat skills under his character.

The Anime portrayed him as a OP character his good points are his programming skills, and intelligence but he acts rather arrogant of his fighting skills.

So, I've only read the first chapter and my comment might already be obsolete... But, what stops this from being an ordinary OC with Naruto's name slapped on?

This definitely explains some things. Too bad this is the end of the current update. You guys didn't really release much lately. I'll be waiting patiently for the divine resurrection stone.
(or more likely, forget about the story until the moment I see the next update notification...)

Serah us probably the most unsubtle captain I've seen to date, except the 'lock them in a room' bunch. Although, it seems like she actually has a plan in mind, and is banking on her actions keeping the targets off balance.

This is probably way late, but... The girls have a life supply of eye candy from this. Especially Asuna.
When you think about it, she's basically acting like Issei when he's confronted with a situation... (since he's always winds up running away somehow).

This sounds juicy.

Was that... Liz? Didn't expect to see her there.

Naruto's acrobatics are sometimes hard to follow. You say he does a backflip, but usually, from how I follow the scene, he's not facing away from the opponent.

And a note: while harem is a common theme in many stories, reverse harem is sometimes that's rarely used. I've only really seen it once in fanfiction, as far as I remember. With the dynamics you're developing here, I think that it might be a viable development eventually. It will need some acrobatics with the scenes though.

Wasn't Vorpal a top class sword skill? I very much doubt that it could be unlocked so soon. Especially since they spent the entire week on doing the martial arts quest, which means they weren't grinding for XP or skill points.