I would love to see if Harry can clear his name also can't wait to see how the rest of story progresses thanks for the amazing writing

Awesome fic

i really like this story plz update.

First of all, congrats on your son and his health! Secondly, take all the time you need, i firmly believe that whatever you release for your stories shall be wonderful so please don't feel rushed

Happy writing!

Cool story. I really like it. Congrats on your son. :)

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Archive of our own, is a fanfiction site

Unless Dumbledore did more than simply cast spells on James to force him from leaving England and from telling people the truth about what happened to him, why didn't he just flat out REFUSE to do ANYTHING, including all the life threatening tasks the old coot TRIED setting up for him? He wasn't obligated to WILLINGLY do ANYTHING his KIDNAPPER wanted if he didn't want to do it. So what stopped him from simply standing back and doing absolutely NOTHING each year Dumbledore TRIED to set up something for him? *lol* Especially when the old coot eventually brought up the prophecy to him, and he didn't laugh in the mans prophecy that points to everything that makes him NOT the one prophecy is talking about. *lol* like the whole BORN to the people who thrice defied the dark lord which his REAL parents NEVER did, and the whole 'born as the seventh month ends' part. Unless the old coot kidnapped him as a baby the day he and Dean were born, for all the old coots knows, James REAL birthday ISN'T as the 'seveth month ends'. And demand to know WHY should HE put HIS life in danger 'fulfilling' a prophecy that has NOTHING to do with him except possibly for the 'marked as his equal' part of the prophecy? Somebody who actually DOES fit the prophecy (Neville) can have the 'honor' of fulfilling it instead and they can leave James alone on the matter.

I hate to be a bitch, but author notes are NOT ALLOWED to be used as chapters. I suggest that you remove them at once, it's best to keep notes and letters on your profile.

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Ok, I'm officially done with this story. But before I go, I just gotta ask, why that security question?
It wasn't something that only he would know, it's something everyone they went to school with and anyone who followed sports would know. Fan or enemy of Harry Potter, you probably know all his achievements. Quiddetch games would be public record, and his record would be there, he was the youngest seeker in a century and a prodigious player at that.
Just... of all things you had then ask, it was a simple trick question that was practically common knowledge? That completely defeats the purpose!
Write on:)

I want to like this story, and I'm gonna try to read another chapter or two, but you have to follow the fundamental rules of writing.
New paragraph every time someone different speaks.
Hit the enter/return key or spam tab Every. Single. Time there's new dialogue.
For example, here's what you wrote:

"So what's in the back pack?" Bobby asked. "Open it up." I said. Sam picked up the back pack and opened it and nearly dropped it back on the floor. "Where the hell did you get all that money, Jamie?" Sam asked. "Well, everybody believed I was Lily and James' son that they let me into their vault. There's over a million dollars there, and it's all real." I said. Dean's mouth nearly fell on the floor.

It should be like this:

"So what's in the back pack?" Bobby asked.

"Open it up." I said. Sam picked up the back pack and opened it and nearly dropped it back on the floor.

"Where the hell did you get all that money, Jamie?" Sam asked.

"Well, everybody believed I was Lily and James' son that they let me into their vault. There's over a million dollars there, and it's all real." I said. Dean's mouth nearly fell on the floor.

You see? Separate every piece of dialogue. When it's all squished together it reads rushed like a run on sentence.
Write on:)

Congratulations on your little one!

Hope everything goes well can't wait for you to update. Do you know if it's a boy or girl ?

Okay critic time.

Points of View: Do not keep doing this shit you did in this chapter. Do not do some stupid scene or a paragraph of someones point of view and then switch to another.

Focus on a single character per chapter like it is done in a game of thrones.