Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read

Beautifully written :)

Haha how cute! It was kind of unexpected, but very lovely.

Cute little storyline, great thinking with this. You kept them so in character! Good work!

xxx Grace.

Completely and utterly enchanting and adorable. I love your sense of humour in this, everything is perfectly timed. I'm hopefully going to nominate this in some awards on Paint It Red - it certainly deserves the recognition anyhow.

This was quite adorable. Can't wait to read more from you! :)

How cute! Love that Jane was so bothered by it. They are so cute! Hopefully they'll finally get together soon on the show. Well not too soon but soon enough. :DDDD

O.O WHEN DID THEY GET MARRIED?

Aww :) cute

Cute story. I liked it very much. Although I think I'd be mad at her too if for not making a big deal of it. That's just silly. I'm glad she got jealous there at the end. Serves her right. I actually thought Jane had left the keys intentionally to set up the confrontation for Lisbon. Anyway, really cute. Good job!

Lovely

Brilliantly satisfying!

Good story but the way I read it I didn't feel she was very into the marriage. She tells the guys they decided to arrive separately. They work together and live together but can't come in the same car? She went shopping as though she lived alone. She may have forgot she didn't buy a dress but Jane wouldn't have. The fact that she couldn't care that they were sitting together is key. People newly married want to be together all the time. So they arrive separately, they are going to sit separately, she doesn't care if her nameplate is wrong, nor does she care that they sit together. Nor did she take either of his compliments directed at her beauty. The relationship just seemed one sided.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww giggle :-)

That was great. It took me a minute to figure out why Jane was so irritated.

I love this so cute.