Reviews for Reviewing the Past |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Why does this stop at chapter 16? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still baffled that Chloe would just allow her friends to read and know these intimate details about her past. Things that she would have wanted to leave behind. Great descriptive writing though. I think you've done a good job of portraying their personalities so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My first thing right off the bat is that its wrote not wrought. Other than that no grammatical critiques. I think that they resolved their notepad thing a little too quickly. If she had been writing in it so much for so long why would she be giving it up so easily? I think that could have been dragged out a little more. But I have just begun reading so maybe there is a reason for the pace you've set here. I like it so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() have youre stop the story i really dont hope |
![]() ![]() ![]() What's with all of the blank chapters (19-22)? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh i like hearing there thoughts on this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO NO NO! PLEASE CONTINUE YOURSELF I DONT ARE IF IT TAKES A THOUSAND YEARS! Only you hold the power to update like this :'((( |
![]() ![]() Hey you're an amazing writer! Please continue this, although it will take time, I really hope you'll want to keep updating this! I just couldn't stop reading It! Great job! And keep it up please! :D |
![]() ![]() Please update this fic! I am loving it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story, it's really amusing reading their reactions. I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol I loved it lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() MOREEEEEEE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep updating! Love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, woulda look at that! Im reviewing the past chapters! Get it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You already posted this chapter |