Reviews for Control
4evernaya chapter 16 . 8/17
Wtf wow
momma2fan chapter 15 . 3/28
I've read this twice now. Can't review on the last chapter, but here you go...snot sobbing over the beautiful ending. Love this!
ObsidianDraconis chapter 16 . 9/30/2019
And by the ones you haven’t finished I mean the Carlisle/Bella (and I thought there was another one?) that you mention in an author’s note. I’ve discovered a liking for that pairing as well, though Jasper/Bella will always be my one true pairing with Paul and Bella following in at a close second.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 16 . 9/30/2019
Little creeped out by his stalking but still crying over the sadness in the end. I have officially read all your completed stories, and hope that you will finish the ones that you haven’t eventually some day. I will tell you, you change tenses in chapters at times. I’ve done this myself which makes editing a bitch. Lol. These were great. I’m totally in love with Paul and love the way you wrote him.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 15 . 9/30/2019
I knew something would go wrong. Seth better have been lauded as the hero of the day because he was by god. Two broken legs and he still managed to get up enough to kill that bitch! I want Edward to go away. How dare he try to have any sort of opinion over Bella, her body, and Paul’s babies. No one should have had any say in it but Paul. No one. Too bad he can’t rip Edward apart for the mere suggestion, though I’m sure he tried and I have a feeling Rose would have helped him.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 14 . 9/30/2019
Well at least they aren’t at odds anymore. Lol. Idk, but I think it’s stupid of them to have only Esme with her. I just have this feeling something is going to happen to them both. Esme isn’t exactly the best of fighters even with training and Victoria is utterly deadly
ObsidianDraconis chapter 13 . 9/30/2019
I hope Edward doesn’t end up being an issue. He isn’t desensitized to her scent any longer and he’ll be around her spilled blood. As for her and Paul. Emily is right, if you ever watch an alpha face off with another wolf, you’ll see his mate rubbing her head under his neck. He is strong, and his duty is to protect her and the pack, but her duty is to protect him and that rubbing under his neck in that situation is protecting his throat from attack. Just because Sam is the alpha doesn’t mean that they don’t all have some alpha in them when it comes to their mates. The sooner they realize that the better.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 12 . 9/30/2019
Wrong place and wrong time to even think about talking about that Bella. He thinks she’s planning to be there physically, none of them have considered the other options. Both are stupid stubborn, and Paul is just scared. The big dummies. Lol
ObsidianDraconis chapter 11 . 9/30/2019
Only one reason they’d call, only one reason they’d ask for her to be there, only one thing bigger than Victoria. The Volturi
ObsidianDraconis chapter 10 . 9/30/2019
Hmmmm wonder why everyone was staring like a bunch of weirdos. Lmao. What made Paul’s wolf come to the surface like that? Something triggered it.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 9 . 9/30/2019
How are any of them still alive? Lmao. For being wolves with heightened senses and shit, they miss a lot. But Jared running into the doorframe amuses the hell out of me.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 8 . 9/30/2019
Good for him for telling her like it is. He’s right about not letting anyone help her and she always blames herself. Sorry Bella, truth hurts sometimes.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 7 . 9/30/2019
Who is she going to talk to though? She can’t tell anyone what really happened.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 6 . 9/30/2019
It makes me angry that Sam would even consider abusing his status that way. Does he not remember what he did to his own imprint when she tried to keep them apart?
ObsidianDraconis chapter 5 . 9/30/2019
I’m still curious why Jake seemed to think he had a chance if they knew Paul imprinted. Or was it only Sam that knew? She’s such a stubborn ass, I just hope Paul can get through to her. You can’t hide away from the world for fear of getting hurt again. If I had done that after my emotionally abusive ex I wouldn’t now be happily married with a child that just turned 10.
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