Me again from saying there can only be 12 Olympians and percy cant be god of tjme based off mythology.
This writings terrible. If it was a original piece many a 4-5/10 If I'm being generous, instead this is a fanfiction. A fanfiction where the charectors are nothing like Riordan's and people from actual mythology dont match that either
Sorry if I'm being rude but ugh I've had 3 brain aneurysms reading this story.

Decent story but the more than 12 Olympians thing ruins it.
There were always 12 ruling gods in greek mythology, from the primordial to the Olympians.
Second percy technically couldnt be the God of time as Chronos is (Not Cronus the king of the titans and God of the harvest) and chronos and his wife Ananke (goddess of necessity/inevitably) reside outside of the univers as there birth is what created the universe ending the eon of chaos.
Them literally existing outside of the cosmos means they cant fade and or really be overthrown as they are the universe.
So you cant say "posidens the god of the sea after Oceanus and Pontus".

So close to my favorite scene

THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC EVER!

Update

YOU ARE MEAN!

That was so FUCKING HILARIOUS! THE ELEPHANT FROM NICO! STUNNING!

This is so bad, horribly written, the worst thing I've read, it's basically character bashing, not just one but all of them, I wouldn't be surprised if you wrote "Then "x" character stupidly said while looking like an asshole" a.k.a your interpretation of Apollo and literally all the GODS. Horrible plot, don't write again, you don't have the talent, and Oc's? Ugh

Update

Didn't thalia have black hair?

Pls update I would like to see Percy and Artemis get back together

Go die in a hole for that

Is it Luna or Artemis I am confused

Soooo...No Percabeth then, I seriously wanna know where this is going.

Oh dear gosh this needs context, but now I'm curious