such a great premise that I don't think I've ever seen, even in all the years of ten\donna fics
you just get their dynamic so well that I still come back years later to read everything you wrote for doctor who

Hope you finish this someday, it's brilliant.

Are you still writing?

I have spent the last 36 hours binge reading your DW fics, and they are so amazing! if you ever get inspired to write another chapter I have a request: have someone slap the Doctor when he interupts emotional angsty conversations by correcting the Time Lord/Lady titles. it's so in character for him to act that way, but seriously so annoying because its like he's missing the point of the conversation, which again in character. I've always loved Donna for her ability to smack him back into the main concern during high emotional drama.
anyways I digress. love your work :D thank you for sharing!

is mr bentley the master by any chance ?

This is amazing! Is there any more stories in the series? I just love Donna! Thank you for writing these?

OMG. Need Moar! Hope you update soon. Have loved the story so far and a very interesting twist on the Donna is a time lady arc, havent seen it done quite this way and I love it!

Omg please update! I love this so much

Interesting sequel so far. I hope you get a chance to update it. And I think John was so sweet singing that to Zoe!

Hey love the story
Can't wait for the next update
I do hope that you are still writing it as it is a fantastic story
:)

I loved an ordinary life so much that I raced off to the sequel and forgot to review! Sad it's iver but loved the ride. Thanks for the doctor Donna feels!

:( Am I ever going to learn why Zoe is the special child? I forgot to mention that I loved the mention of 9 in the last chapter. I really don't blame Donna for blowing up, I loved the life she had with John Smith too.

Finally the truth. So happy the Doctor is finally asking some questions and figuring out what is going on.

Donna must be really scared if she's actively keeping things from the Doctor. That is some deep denial on her end. Although I'm not getting bad vibes about her visions or whatever I am worried about Mr. Bentley and why Zoe is so scared to open her locket.

Does this mean Donna understands what is going on but isn't ready to accept it yet? For someone so clever the Doctor can be so clueless.