Hi just read your story it was good.

not bad i liked it

Sweet and deep story, I liked it very much. I wonder now if Draco would ever get back, and what would happen if a changed Draco together with the scoobie gang would return to Hogwarts.

Neat so far! :) I like it. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. And I like how Dawn told Draco about her origins as the Key. It was very well-done. And I like how Dawn answered Draco's question of being happy simply by kissing him. Very cool, as well as very inspiring, too.

Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)