so well written .

God the feels! It was great! Love the pairing!

D: Poor Mephisto. qq But then I was also sad that Shiro died even though he only appeared in the beginning. :c

Tragically misunderstood fangirls don't cry either. So I'm going to go get some eye drops to wash the eyelash out of my eye...

Your story has a kind of spare beauty to it. I'm happy to have stumbled across it...

Here again, I felt my heart squeeze and you've written no more than a few hundred words, if that. I'm not complaining about the length. On the contrary, I think you're incredibly skilled. It's not easy to *demonstrate* as opposed to *describe*, but you certainly make it look effortless.

I've searched high and low for a well-written piece about my favorite demon. When I excluded the PWP for this fandom, I found a handful of stories, and yours is by far the best. I'm not opposed to yaoi, you understand. I just want it to be well-written.

And you've delivered. In a couple hundred words you've managed to write a character study with more depth than most people can manage in a couple thousand words.

Hey, thanks for the story.

At the end here, I just had to go 'naawww'
I feelsorry for Mephisto. Great story

This could be the fourth time I read, or the fifth - I'm not quite sure. Why is there so little of this pairing around, when it has so much potential...? T_T I know it's not likely that you will write another fic on them, this one being so conclusive, but if you do it would be lovely, truly lovely.

This is a story who truely lives up to the meaning of bittersweet.

I want more! /swimming in my own pool of tears

FAAAAAAAADGE! Tear-jerker! D:
This pairing needs more LOVE!

I love! definitely love it. Please continue!

Oh... *purrs* I love tragic romance. And with these two there is every possibility for a complicated/tragic relationship. You make it so tender and so painful and so sweet... I'd like to think that Mephisto cried, I really do...

:,) I love this,please continue

Oh. My. God. JDSGHAIVLGYBEBELvnjbdksavhwr uigvbqwfchdslkjajvbvchbwdjvb dwr;ip

That was me smashing against the keyboard with euphoria.

I want to review multiple times RIGHT NOW to show my love but I'm scared I'll look creepy.

Please keep updating. Haha.