Hello, just finished a reread of your story. I sure have enjoyed it (again!) it would be awesome if you ever were inclined to finish it. I keep it on alert, just in case :)

Please! Please! Please! Update soon. I love this story! Need more!

Please finish this story!

I’ve spend all day reading this and got to the chapter 27 and frantically looked for the next chapter. I noticed it’s nearly a year to the day since you last updated. I really hope you do continue and finish this story.

An intriguing fic. At first it almost seemed like a play by play of SOA’s first season. But you’ve added just enough uniqueness that I’ll keep reading. Well done.

I believe it was Maria! Good story and writing. I like SOA and the way you use Twilight characters made the story for me thinking back of two good stories. Hope for another update as soon as you are able to find time to relax and enjoy your family time. That always come first.

Please write more I like the story I was looking for long time now. I love to find more stories with MC in it if you know some could tell and I like mafia story too. Thanks

Please update

Love this story!

Can’t wait for more on this story. I’m really loving all the characters and storylines. Great job!

So good, excited for the next installment.

I wonder what Renee is up to, probably needs money. I hope Jazz is able to get to Alice before Em beats the stew out of him. I’m glad Xavier is going to the hospital with Bella.
I just love this story so much. I love the different POV, and its meaty. The loner story allows you to develop all these interesting characters.

I’m glad Xavier is willing to let the MC handle this James. With Edward’s call, there’s only a matter of time until Tyler realizes who it is. I understand exactly how Bella feels about Tanya. She makes my skin crawl.

Yes, Edward is adorable jealous. Tanya ishould be easy to right because her POV is so single minded! Hah! Now Maria is going to get in the middle of it, and it might get violent from another end. Just what Bella needs with the psychotic stalker out there. I think Carlisle knew a lot about what was going on, but he had more important things to think about.

I really like Xavier. He seems like a really genuine stand up guy. I think Edward should tell Bella what he is doing with Tanya so she doesn’t get the wrong idea. I’m not for leading Tanya the skank on. I m glad Edward mentioned he doesn’t have sex with the porn sluts .