tbh, i really IS curious about what happens next of this series.. like WHO exactly is the one that put a blanket over them(LuNa) at the Chap 1 and did THEY(Nami and Robin) knew they are actually a rival or something? :v
maaann.. i'm dying for the next Chap! please update soon mate i already loving this!

this is interesting.. hope to see more of this,,

Plz do the next chapter and I love your work and plz do a HAREM with luffy Robin and nami

For a moment I thought you were implying that Robin did something to the Coffee Cake, on some Rick Ross/Pill Cosby shit lmao

I like watching brazzers porn nothing less nothing more

it was amazing would love more it was also very funny good job

Hey I made a fic based on your second chapter.

"So you've never kissed anyone before?Nope" um, Reiju would like a word

Your Luffy is so in-character I'm honestly a little disappointed he didn't ask if Nami pooped.

Man I don't know how I hadn't read this story yet but I am really glad I found it because we need more stories like this one,I wonder if hancock will have her chance with luffy afterall she is oretty cute only with him :3

I like how you put the story together the way you did. I like how you managed to capture Luffy and his reation to his current dilemma, and how you managed to accurately reflect on the major event that have transpired in the official one piece and how you displayed the emotional reflection and state of both Nami and Robin. I don't know if you will ever read this, but I just want you to know you did an excellent job at story telling and writing this fanfiction. I would be very happy to read the third and final chapter in your story, even if it is erotic.

You missed a couple letters

Great story.

So whens the next chapter? Because this is really interesting.
P.S. THe Ace thing was funny.

Look I'm sad to say that he will probably not get around to finish this sadly the most recent update to any story he has was back in 2014 it's now 2016 either he forgot about the story or really busy with school or he just decided to go do something else instead finishing the story or the worst case scenario is he's dead I highly doubt that but who knows I honestly think he just doesn't have time to write fanfics because look at the two chapters he has written they are extremely long and must take a while to write so as much I love this fanfic I don't think he will ever come back or hopefully any time soon