This is a very interesting view on Tenten that I really I enjoyed. I think it is easy for a young girl to compare herself to those around her, and you managed to capture her insecurities without making them cliche.

I kind of want to cry now

I like this short character study. I think Tenten comes off as a strong character in the manga abd it is a bit hard imagning her feeling like this. Still it was an interesting exploration, and nicely written. Please don't turn this into a romance fiction. Too many stories have the boys teaching the girls that they are beautiful and while it's nice, the character portrait you painted needs to realize her own beauty.

Make NejiTen