oh no that maede ms sad ibut i think you shouldve included azula more?

That was strangely good. And touching..

This is great. I really liked the simplicity and the way you could see his thoughts behind it

Oh, wow. This is so beautiful, well thought-out, and creative. Undeniably my favorite part was Aang's bequest to his successor.

There were a couple typos throughout, and a few minor details that seemed confusing or could be changed. For instance, when you say "my heir" (in the White Lotus section), do you mean the next Avatar? Because all the people he's listing are his "heirs".

I love this piece. Great job.

For some reason this makes me feel emotional. My eyes watered a little.

This was so original (in my opinion) and I just loved it all. It filled me with nostalgia, made me chuckle a couple of times, and I may or may not have had to to suppress a sappy grin accompanied by teary eyes.

And all under 1000 words.

Props to you!

Childhood nickname, ha! Twinkletoes shall forever be his name! MWAHAHAHAHA!

Thanks for the heartbreak. i was just getting over his death but NOPE. anyways this was cute, heartwarming (and breaking), touching and just the right amount of humor for someone like Aang