Reviews for Hollywood Coaching
Guest chapter 5 . 6/15
Biggest mistake they made is to make katie 6 years younger than the guys, probably because Ciara did look young for her age, but shes onlya year younger than Cymphonique, and she appeared on the show as a 14 year old in Season2 when the guys were 17. So if they made Katie only 3 years younger, we would've seen a Jatie fluff romance by Season4.
Even in BigTime Dance when the guys were performing Stuck, Katie Jo Camille and Stephanie were the ones in front of the stage, that says something.
ChordOverstreetFan chapter 11 . 1/22/2019
Will this or one of the companion pieces actually show the wedding? I have to assume it would be this one since it wasn't in the Jatie story.
Science-Fantasy93 chapter 11 . 9/1/2013
Finally got around to reading this! And I loved this chapter! May I just say that Kendall's reaction to James wanting to marry Katie was gold? Pure, pure gold. Him trying to get to James so that he could kill him...I cracked up at that. And Logan with all his big words and the guys getting confused about what he just said...That was awesome. And the group hug! Hahahaha Carlos, of course he'd love it.

Anyway, amazing chapter, and I hope you get the chance to update very soon :)
QuirkySmile chapter 11 . 7/9/2013
Love the bromance! Overprotective Kendall is so endearing, as well. And Logan's vocabulary makes me laugh. Can't wait for more :)
thesandbar chapter 11 . 7/1/2013
HEY, YOU'RE NOT DEAD!:D

James is gonna propose! EEP! I honestly loved Kendall's little freak-out.
annabellex2 chapter 11 . 7/1/2013
Yeah James is going to propose! Hopefully everything will go alright! ; )
tomfeltonlover1991 chapter 10 . 6/26/2013
Love this. Please please update soon.
Science-Fantasy93 chapter 10 . 4/27/2013
Hahahaha oh Carlos. He's so adorable and funny and clueless sometimes that you've just gotta love him. And of course James was just "whatever" to the sight of his ex girlfriend sitting in the living room. And why doesn't it surprise me that Kendall didn't think about calling Katie? Still, poor Katie haha. That can't have been a nice surprise, but for the most part she handled it well. And don't worry about the scene, Bev doesn't seem like someone who would cause drama intentionally, and neither is Katie, and like you said, Carlos was there, so there couldn't have been too many problems.

As always, amazing chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next :)
annabellex2 chapter 10 . 4/26/2013
Glad there wasnt much tension between Jatie & kendall & Bev.. Right there with you about Season 4 & the 'possible end', glad but sad I guess! Update when you can!
QuirkySmile chapter 10 . 4/25/2013
A wonderful chapter, as always. I'm glad everyone has finally re-met under their new relationship statuses, and that it didn't get too awkward (aside from Carlos' love for soap operas, lol). Can't wait for more !
Readplz chapter 10 . 4/25/2013
Kendall, seriously, he has no idea how stupid it is to bring his gf to see Katie w/out telling. Yeah, carlos is such a ball of energy, it just makes me want to hug him. I love btr, I thing i would collapse if they ended it, but if they did, I wonder how it's going to end.
thesandbar chapter 10 . 4/25/2013
I kind of love how easily Bev settled in with all the awkwardness. Gotta laugh at Katie's spazziness (is that a word? If not, it is now!). Kendall's so Kendall. Calm, cool, and collected. James is still so smooth. And then there's Carlos. Oh 'Los. Honestly don't know what to say. Don't know what to say. He's just so adorable!
Science-Fantasy93 chapter 9 . 3/27/2013
Amazing chapter! So, Bev and Lucy finally met. And Lucy totally did save Kendall's butt, which was just awesome. And I think it's sweet how much James is willing to do for Katie, he clearly loves her. So. We finally got to see a Carlos and Marka scene. I'm probably totally wrong, but it kinda seems like there could be a possibility of romance for them...If they ever stop trying to kill each other, I mean.

And I don't think you were "taking the mickey" out of any of the women in this story. I think you were writing them pretty realistically actually. Almost everyone knows how catty and jealous and even bossy females can be, we're famous for it. But like you also showed, they can also help guys out, so we do have our redeeming qualities ;P

Fantastic chapter! I'm looking forward to the next update :)
thesandbar chapter 9 . 3/23/2013
I like this angry Carlos(; James is SO whipped! And Kendall... Oh Kendall.
Readplz chapter 9 . 3/23/2013
Yes, I got to see more Kendall and Bev. Carlos really hates Marka doesn't he? OMG, the part when you were talking about the sparkly leotard, i just started laughing, because i remember how funny kendall looked in it.
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