Ah una storia interresante!

This story is boring..The pairing is atrocious, esp Ned and that abusive whore/bitch Cantleyn!

I hope he gets with Cersei! (If you’ve read Lady Stark you’d get why the pairing is so cute.. opposites attract and all) Great writing so far and looking forward to what’s next

Buena historia espero con ansias por el próximo capitulo. Enserio es una buena historia espero que vuelvas a escribir mas de ella.

hello still alive

Man I've been desperate for a King!Ned fic but I haven't really going one until now, so this is scratching a huge itch! If love to see more!

God you showed off that Chekhov gun with pride! can't wait to see what it does!

Besides tyrion though i like most love him...he is simply a teen and too young to be on the small council. Good chapter though.

I really really like this story and i thought this chapter turned out great too. I do however have one nit pick (my first!) The beel tower in seagaurd wouldnt have been wrung for atleast 350 years or maybe 400 due to the ironborn owning all of the riverlands under lord harren and he was the 3rd generation to do so before aegon burned him alive in his castle.

Too late to recommend kingsguards but maybe Sandor, Brienne, or Obara?

Look forward to seeing the future, whenever you should decide on it

Hmm, wouldnt there be more then one pyromancer, that Jamie should be takeing care of it the entire city were to be lit up?

And I dont recall him being so quick to tell

I love it! I really hope to see an update in the future! Ned as the King is really good to read.

Well, Stannis the Mannis is gonna be plotting and scheming at the earliest opportunity :P

Hoster would be jumping for Joy to have his daughter be Queen. Not just saying i suppose. Love the story tho!