I remembered reading this many years ago, back before it had this many chapters. I must have been 13-14 years old. I remember it being a bit hard for me to follow along but it still stuck with me. I was amazed, your story was huge, I felt like I was reading something really epic and deep. I could just tell that there was so much talent in this story. I switched over to AO3 though, and forgot about this fanfic, and honestly, forgot about this site. I regret that. I wish I could have been someone that wasn't afraid to comment, and that I had been there to cheer you on. Even incomplete though, your work deserves recognition. I'm so glad I came back and found it. Rereading the old chapters was nice, reading the chapters I hadn't read was amazing. I stayed up til 4 AM, I just couldn't put it down.

Thank you for your time and effort. I hope you're doing well.

In my family when I want a snack that is how I make toast since we don't have a toaster and I prefer toast on a pan than toaster toast.

Hi! This is one of my favorite Pokémon fics, your writing style is so pleasant yet the plot keeps me hooked :)) Are you still planning to continue this fic? Hope you're well

I really do hope this story gets updated someday! Its so enthralling and is honestly one of the most enjoyable fanfictions I’ve read before! Your writing style is so nice and pleasant!

I really am enjoying this. I understand it might never update again but it’s a good read. It left us on a cliffhanger that I’m fine with. Everything is falling into place and you didn’t leave us in the middle of something terrible.

I did have one constant thought. Why are they talking about N in government buildings. Specially after the fiasco. Most governments monitor there citizens very closely. Considering their apartment is government owned I would have expected Mic’s or something of the sort. With that said. Most apartments buildings have cameras and N would have been picked up on his visit. Smarty mc smart pants meeting N during prints would have also been recorded.

Stills great story and most people don’t like thinking about these facts so it’s not too big of an issue.

I would love to see this continued sometime but I understand that may not be possible.

For author:

Hope you’re doing OK.

I love your writing style! Please update! You discontinued this at a very poor spot (for us readers)

I enjoy reading your fanfiction and hope this story will be continued? I hope it will because the plot is quite interesting, and I can't wait to see what will happen the next chapter. With this said have a nice day!
Sincerely
blue-analytic

I managed to read this in two days (more like one day and two hours) and I'm pretty much obsessed. I really like the world building here; learning about the government structure and the politics in the story is really interesting. The character interactions are really great, too, and you've done a great job of fleshing out the characters. (Also Touya and N are pretty much the best power couple-they both have legendary fuckin dragons, okay, and N is probably gonna be, like, the new president.)

One thing I noticed from, like, the first chapter, was that Touya brought along a sketchbook, and I wondered if you were anning on doing anything with that (it's probably full of an obscene amount of drawings of N, and Touko probably just kind of laughs whenever she sees it).

Last, but literally in no possible way least, will you ever be continuing this story? I hope so, because I love pretty much everything about it (just in case my awkward rambling didn't tip you off to that).

i loove this! you write so beautifully!

screams this isso good

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you're amazing!

[One of you must have asked a question about love, am I right?]
Spot on. That's kinda scary. 0_0

And yes, finally out of the elevator!

Still stuck in the elevator I see. xD

["Have you ever been in love before?"]
That's an interesting question to ask..._

Also, Touya thinking that if Zorua was abused, it would fit right in with N's theme of depressing back story.

Oh hey, there's the blackout that was mentioned on the TV that Touya ignored. xD

THIS IS LIKE REALLY INTERESTING AND I'M JUST INTERNALLY PANICKING BECAUSE IS TOUYA THE HERO OR MAYBE IT'S TOUKO LIKE

as usual another beautiful chapter with an adorable oshawott! would it be possible to see more of little zorua in the other chapters? I love zorua and oshawott's interaction, it's always adorable. I can't wait to see N reaction to finding out Black got accepted! anyway love the chapter and love the story, thanks for the update!