That was absolutly amazing! Love the story! Aw, poor Twilight. Don't blame yourself for this, Time! One complaint though, you need to go through and make some spelling and grammar checks because there are some times where I go, "What...? Oh, typo."
Thx, that would make it much easier to read

i loved it and hope there will be more! XD

Kawaiiii!

i think make another chapter its good

It was rather good and like me I feel the same way..that my stories suck but I keep going!

I'm telling you I'm not that good! I just helped you with the writing. Sheesh!

Anyways glad I could help. Hopefully people will like the idea :D