Great job!

awhhhhsss :)

Lovely story. I have to fave this.

awwwwwwwwwwwww no kiss

Cuuuute

Ahh platonic love, poor Lucy XD Are you going to leave it as a oneshot? Id love to read what happens next n_n

Ahhh! Cute ending!

hahahahhaahhaa

You know, in my mind, for a NaLu one shot to be good, it has to contain humour, fluff, romance and little hurt/comfort mixed in the middle. And of course, it has to be well written and interesting.

Your fic had all of that. I loved the humour, and the fluff, and Natsu was being so sweet and gentle at the end...and yet he was oblivious at the same time. Both Lucy and Natsu were perfectly in character. And wahahaha Laxus was so funny and cute at the same time! XD

There was only one mistake that I found : "I couldn't live Happy." I assume that it was supposed to be "I couldn't live without Happy." or something similiar.

Good job! :)

Beautiful Sensations.

It's sooo funny! Every one even the girls fought for Lucy! I can't imagine Laxus! XDDDDDDDDDDDD

This was extremely funny and... the Natsu part was so cute! aaahhh whatta lovely fanfic :) hahaha I really laughed when everyone fell inlove with her.

Great job on the fic. If there's one thing I like about certain NaLu fics, it's that almost everyone is in character, and not OOC. Just bothers me sometimes when near the end that Natsu confesses to her or something. This would make a good Omake for the manga or anime. Keep up the good work.

Very cute!

Loved it! 3