Refound this and had to reread, it cracks me up every time.

Heeheeheeheeheeheehee. Niiiice. Leave it. I love it. 10/10

To quote Clara from Doctor Who "Threats don't work unless you deliver. Never start with your final sanction. You've got nowhere to go but backwards." Trying not to laugh to loud and wake my mom and sis... but I will be reading this to them tomorrow. 5/5

Thant was a really cute little fanfiction! Thanks for writing! )

The end of this was super cute. First all dialogue piece that I have read and I loved it

This made me smile. Great dialogue. Great job capturing the essence between the two

Awesome. Just awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice story :)

Hehe don't know if you read Harry Potter, but there's a charcter named Ernie McMillan :) Really like the story so far, by the way!

Intreastng, its not a afavorite but its still good. Just wished the words will stop swimming!

I enjoyed this! It was cute and funny :)

Mayhem

Nice twist with the box not missing and the non valueble tresure. I liked the beehive line, very funny! Thanks for wraping it up and giving us another great conversation. I look forward to the bank heist, I feel sorry for the robbers already! ;)

HAHAHAHAHA! NICE!

Hahaha! Gotta love this! Although I almost fell sorry for Ernie. :)

Teehee:D

It's the kind of story that enspires teehees. Silly, playful and fun, nice break from the angst I've been reading lately:) Ridiculous and very plausible, you do a very good job of keeping them in character, which is hard with just dialogue. It sounds weird, but you're good with your hums and uhs and ems, I can almost here them saying it! Great job, I'll follow you when I'm bothered logging in :p