This is such a great fanfic. I’ve read some where they totally twist the characters personalities and it doesn’t seem like them anymore but I think you’re doing a great job and staying true to the characters. And I think it’s great how well paced and descriptive the story is. You’ve done a great job at using a little creative license with Marshall and how he transforms and his story and all that. I also like how you made Gumball a good guy. Honestly really excited to keep reading!

Please please, finish this piece! It's absolutely amazing and I amount other people would love for you to complete it, I noticed that you recently this year updated a book of yours too!
This book is just amazing, the was you portal the characters / ship, the way it's not toxic, over exaggerated or half-assed shows that it has enough potential just as it is! Not to mention you could go places with your writes story like for example is great.

Overall I just live this book and I re-read it all the time in n hopes of you updating it even if you're not in the fandom anymore. Please just finish it even if it's just a few more chapters.

Love your work!

Oh. My. GLOB. I loved the story but, was worried when I looked at when this was last updated in 2014. Like what the heck bro, if you need inspiration just ask. Like Natalie I feel like she will betray Marshall. Also Fionna should be possessed by Hannah Abadeer and try to stab Marshall, but resists and stabs herself and Marshall turns her into a vampire to save her. Also the one who challenged Marshall should die and his wife or girlfriend or whatever should attack him, then Fionna will grab her and punch the lady in the face. But Marshall should get hurt again so that he is surprised, then Fionna protects him and the illusion spell suddenly breaks. BOOM! Betrayal by Natalie. I'm sure you can figure out the rest. I came up with this last night. Show me dem skills bro. You know you have to finish this. No excuses! DON'T BE LAZY, I DON'T CARE IF YOU ARE A ADULT OR IF YOU ARE A CHILD YOU MUST FINISH THIS STUFF. If you need more inspiration I will send another comment.

NOOOOOOOOO! I was beyond sad when I noticed this wasn't finished. I don't know why you haven't written the rest, maybe you got stuck, maybe people didn't write a review. THE POINT IS THE STORY IS NOT DONE! I loved this story, it is one of my favorites, honestly. But you should finish it to the end, no matter the hardship. I think you should turn Fionna into A vampire and marry her to Marshall Lee. Or something I know it is hard, but you can do it! I BELIEVE IN YOU!

It’s been years. I’ve grown from snotty tween to someone who can drive and has to fully function. My reading taste has grown from edgy Y/A novels to epic fantasies with comedy and character arcs.
A lot has changed for me.
But I still come back to read this, and I’m never disappointed.
If you have the time and ability, please update. I’ll still be waiting for the next chapter, because this fic has been a companion to me as I age.

Please update :’( This is one of the best written and skillfully crafted fan fictions I’ve ever read and I’ve had my hopes up since 2014 that you’ll update it again!

Still reading PLEASE WRITE MORRRRREEEE

Loved it. Kinda sadly being let off in the middle of it...

you have probably abandoned this brain child but i want to say that i loved reading it

Marshall can't really leave the story! Can he?! I hope that he comes back to life!

This is a really good read. A shame that it's been 3 years since it updated, but it would be awesome if it ever did get updated :)

Hey r u gonna right a nother chapter plz because it's been a freaking long time and this is really good man

I just wanna say, you are an amazing writer! You keep the story interesting and captivating all the way through, and every last detail is perfect! I love this FanFiction, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Hi! I love everything about this series! Its well thought out, detailed, interesting, and much, much more! You are such a talented writer! The time it takes for a chapter to be released is killer, but one word of your writing would be worth twice the wait. Thank you for the gift of this series!

I REALLY like what it writing. I think the plot line is amazing...