this was so interesting to read, I loved it so much. I have so many questions! What was Luffy doing up on the railing of a school he doesn't attend? Why hasn't Sabo ever mentioned having a younger brother? Why was he singing 'Eleanor Rigby'? Was it just a random song? And why the 'Alien' quote? This Luffy seems like a very complex yet incredibly simple character... I do hope you attempt to continue this.. no doubt will I be extremely interested in reading it. Thank you for posting this

this was probably one of my favorite one-shots to ever read. it was so different and confusing but that just made it more wonderful.
I can't just pick out a certain little detail that I loved because the whole thing was so damn good. it was truly capturing.
will you ever continue it?

Even though it fits as a one shot I can't help but crave for another chapter, although I'm guessing two years without a new chapter means that this will always remain a one shot. I'm quote curious myself as to why Luffy is home-schooled and Sabo is not. Why wouldn't Sabo have told his best friend that he has a younger brother? Hasn't Ace ever visited their home is they're best friend? So many unanswered questions.

I like it, and i love the story. it something in luffy for not answer ace question.. i looking forward to your story. I hope you update at soon...

a little confusing but okay!

Awwww... This was pretty sweet XD hope you'll make it a two-shot but still cute :)

is this complete?

Luffy was beautiful, well I can't see him but how how acted in this story.

i liked the song. thank you. all the lonely people, that phrase was the one that took me.

anyways, you forgot this fic, didnt you. still, i can see luffy somewhat ethereal and unreal in this story. a ghost, an alien being, a mystery and unfathomable depths to him that cling. him disappearing in the sun and sabo telling ace that he doesnt have a brother because he's dead. unless you write more luffy is a ghost. or an enigma, i mean he is in one piece already but here too then. the secrets he guards...

lu is , a picture like that, lu against the backdrop of the setting sun that is apicture i like looking at except for the possibility of death but hes already dead. ace touched luffy, though.
i thought in space, no one could "here" you scream? hear.

I love the whole story! are you going to continue it? please do! :)

I love the way Luffy acts in this and ace's overprotective big brother side, I loved when Luffy screamed and when he was walking on the railing scaring the hell out of Ace xD Please continue it!

I don't see these kind of fics often, it's really very refreshing to read them. I think your works are very well-written and original, and the fact that you portrayed Luffy as not totally idiotic, but rather strange and intriguing is interesting:) PLEASE CONTINUE! Loved how you described Luffy's actions and Ace's responses to them

I'm curious to see what happens next XD Hope you continue it

Oh my, this seems just too interesting. I do hope that you continue this story.

Interesting. I loved the randomness of it all and i hope you continue it.