AMAZING UPDATE YOU MUST!

Really? English isn't your first language? Wow, it's really good for someone who's not a native speaker! :) and the story was awesome!

Cute:))

Good result

I hate jeyna reynas stupid and beep beep words I can't say they wouldn't even show up

Eeeeeeeeeeekkkk so much fluff and jasper and... oh my I'm stunned. Great job!

Jason sounds like a little bitchy girl, but I still love you as an author and the story!

Cool!

soooooo beautiful n awsm os! plz write more...u rly write gud..!

Fluffy, cheezy, and cliché. I loved it. It was so sweet, I almost cried.

jasper fluff :') I LOVE'M!

You're an amazing writer, nikitabella! I really loved it!

To joybella, why hello again. i'm surprised to see you again after all these days.. Months maybe? Well, my point for this awkward message is that, STOP GIVING JEYNA FANS A BAD NAME. I like Jeyna, okay? And majority of the Jeyna people are actually nice but majority of the attitude shown from Jeyna fans are b*tchy whiny like yours. It's disgraceful. I ship both Jasper and Jeyna AND I like Jeyna by a one point but most of the time, I defend Jasper with all my heart. I know this is the first time you have ever heard from me but I swear, I have seen too much action from you, On here and ON tumblr and from some people on here (and no, Joybella, they are not a majority of Piper Fans. Did you know that not only Piper fans finds you annoying?) Another thing is that why are you reading a jasper fanfic? I thought you hated it? Normally, people would ignore what they hate instead of hours stalking what they hate and throwing a huge tantrum don't see Jasper fans reviewing angrily at Jeyna stories. Stop calling these people biased and hypocrites.

nikitabella, sorry if this review became a hate review to a person but I just want to let you know that this is good andnwrote more, okay? :)

I like that you write Jeson and Piper's POVs...Love this story...And lovefluffy, cheesy and so on stories...:) :*

YEE, awww, sooooo swet!

Kind of biased and ooc, then again most Jasper stories fail to keep the characters, well in character. Not grammar issues or typos though, so that's a very nice surprise. Need to cut the drama for Piper cause you're making her look like Cosette from Les Miserable and it's not even funny. The only way to improve your writing is to write more so give us more stories and hopefully you'll improve with time.

Also, to the guest, please mind your own fucking business? It's not up for you to decide what a reviewer writes you bitch with no life. No one really cares about your opinion so go back at sucking lemons or whatever you do with your free time.

Cute! Made me smile like an idiot! Thank you for making my morning! ;)