It's beautiful...

Love the story and I'm so glad that he gave in.

Write both!

I was laughing so hard at the beginning when she ambushed him.
I became frustrated when he pushed her away.
Sad when he told her he is not worthy of her.
Elated that she set him straight.

Now I am feeling warm and tender with his admission to loving her and his promise to treasure her.

Thank you for the story.

Yes, yes please do !

That. Was. Breathtaking.

I don't say that often but this story was beautiful and it took my breath away. Thank you so much and I would love to see a back story.

The one and only,
Rottedheart.

wonderful. simply wonderful

omg i hate oneshots like these! theyre so bloody damn short but so beautiful that they dont need anything else! :S :S :S :S but kk that was honestly soooooo beautiful!
LOVED it!
fcCp

LIKED :)

I'd happily read both!

I would love to read more, either a prequel or sequel!

Aw! Loved this! Very excellent! I would love to see a sort of sequel! Keep writing. ;)

Not attractive? Snape please you're sexy as hell lol. Nice little story, I really enjoyed it.

Oh it's awesome..I luv it! Plzz post soon.i'll b waiting eagerly...it's really awesome!
U have all my luv and support XOxO

Loved it and I would like to see a one shot of their one night/backstory :)