Yeah, I'm totally crying right now.

Crying so much, incredible.

Woah.
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I have never seen anything like this before.
How do you come up with this stuff?
Like seriously.

All I can say is damn girl. And for some reason I loved it.

Ho-oly crap. that was really intense but i loved it. really cool writing style, no one's ever done something like this before. This was truly amazing. Great job!

This has got to be the saddest thing I've read all day, which is saying something since I was just working on my research project about the Salem witch trials. Seriously, this was epic! I love psychotic breakdowns, and I've always loved screwing around with Zach's head, so I was psyched to see this. Hope to see more like this soon. Keep up the awesome work!
Aiden Rose

but god seven devils YES GOOD SONG.

hell second person pov isn't a thing most people can do well but you did a good job with it like really A AND kudos to you for being brave enough to do it.

and i always love to see that kind of psychotic breakdown in a character and it's a really amazing thing when it's done well so thank you for writing this really, it practically made my day.

OMG.. You mad me start bawling my eyes out halfway through the story! It was so beautiful, yet so deadly! 3

I cried so hard! This was absolutely amazing! I personally love this type of writing style, and I am actually starting to write something to this effect too. I hope you make more of these because I'll be looking forward to reading them.

Oh my god. This was just really really really really really really really creepy. I cried so much when Zach killed Cammie.. (

I was actually crying so hard when I read this, amazing.

yes, definitely morbid but easily one of the best one shots ive read in a long time, great work! :D

This is so good. Unbelievable. I actually had tears swimming in my eyes. So well written as well, deserve an award!

This made me cried so hard :'( *Claps* Well written! I swear that was like, for reals, amazing! It was like: Shooot..never have I