Reviews for Jade's Secret |
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Hikari Nova chapter 1 . 6/15/2016 some grammar errors also it's herd not heared near the end lol |
alkkhes chapter 3 . 1/11/2014 good story stoping here for now hope to finish reading it tomorrow only major downside is that there is alot of simple mistakes in the wording other then that not bad i get the gist of it hope the the rest is just as good story wise it is very different what with jade already starting off as a half demon half human just hope that is explained later too |
Marionette of Wonderland chapter 1 . 10/28/2013 I had read your story a time before, and I can tell you have many errors, I assume do to a difficult computer, but I still find this story to be...interesting. |
VaMpIrERaVeN117 chapter 20 . 9/6/2013 Hey really good story keep it up update soon |
sparkbot chapter 20 . 9/1/2013 Barely any dialogue, and where was Tso Lan released in this chapter. Very rough draft summary. You should explain the events more. |
Taeniaea chapter 20 . 9/1/2013 great chapter |
gaara king of the sand chapter 20 . 9/1/2013 well it is short but a OK chapter nice to have you updating again well till next message bye |
D.J. Scales chapter 20 . 9/1/2013 Once again this is awesome. |
gaara king of the sand chapter 19 . 8/31/2013 Great job this chapter was great I though I wish you were able to update sooner but great job non-the-less well till next message bye |
D.J. Scales chapter 19 . 8/31/2013 Alright now that was incredible. |
Taeniaea chapter 19 . 8/31/2013 great story |
gaara king of the sand chapter 18 . 8/10/2013 sorry fror not seeing the update for some reseen your story was removed from my account sadly this ant the first story to have that happen to i had to find five other story's a few months ago but don't worry i'll keep an eye out for this story if this happens again on a brighter note this was a great chapter i hope you can update the next one soon well till next message bye |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/23/2013 shendu would be stupid enough to try and take them |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/23/2013 o..kay weird clever but weird seriously why do people get such a kick outta evil shadowkahn jade? |
IskandarVesperia chapter 18 . 5/14/2013 This story is very interesting and i can't wait to read the next chapter |