And they lived happily in "otherness" ever after ;)

hehe. This so poignantly depicted the mixed bag of emotions of first love.
Lovely job!

This was an excellent story and I really enjoyed reading it!

AWWWW! What cute little sweetiepies! I really love this fic! \(u )/

This. is. Cuteness.

That was so cute :) I loved it. You well described Natsume's feelings and I think that was a good idea. It wasn t too short that way. I wish there were more sweet stories like this one.

Awwwwwwwwwweeeee, thats so cute

Well done.

I really like your idea: )these two are just cute.

I'm so... happy. So euphoric that you actually finished this fanfiction... :')
WELL DAMN IT TOOK YOU TWO YEARS BUT IT WAS WORTH IT! XDD

And it's rather ironic how there are all these things that have changed in my life since I had read this fanfiction... I mean I'm actually not into "yaoi" anymore (not into the gay se x anyway), I've stopped reading One Piece lol, and anyway many things have changed mentally as well... But still, this pairing will always be in my heart. It is one of the most sweet and innocent pairings in the entire boys' love history. xP

Thank you for finishing this... It's in my heart. Lovely and beautiful.
Good job. :)

Thank you for writing, I loved it! :)

It's progressing! :3 That brief kiss Natsume made was very surprising yet it was kind of.. how would I say it... pleasing?
This chapter is great also! I hope you still continue this. :3
Hmm I also noticed that we may be a bit the same in the writing style but you are a hundred fold better than me, of course. Thanks for writing this!

I really love this pair! And this is a great fic. The idea of Natsume being able to share another person's dream is unique and quite adorable too since he became so frantic about invading other person's privacy.

P.S. About being wordy, yeah me too... I get too wordy in my fics.. :3 But I think it's not that wordy...
Anyways, thanks for writing this. I'm continuing to the next chapter already. I'm excited. :3

Oooooh man...! ; u ;
That was fcking amazing! So cute, fluffy, lovely, romantic, innocent... It was perfect... ; u ;
I'm happy you made it a twoshot after all (because come oooon you couldn't possible leave Natsume and Tanuma with such a burden on their chests! xD) but HNGH I really wish there was another chapter OTL

Anyway, I really don't have anything "bad" to say about this... It was truly lovely! And everyone was in character (I could even imagine Nishimura and Kitamoto sleeping like that! HAHAHA) and in the end, the way Natsume just gave a tiny kiss on Tanuma's lips and quickly left from his side, without saying any words... YES just YES oh god, I could see that too... haha man... man... That was perfect! ; u ;
Thank you a billion for writing this; though I really wish you'll write one more chapter... just one.. one more... or two.. three? AGH XD
(well, you haven't marked the story as "complete" so... yeah. I wish my hopes for another chapter are valid ;-;)

beautiful. absolutely perfect *-*

Sooo... whens the next chapter coming out?
I love both of these and can see maybe one more. You said you were worried about lengthy descriptions but I didn't find that to be true at all. Both characters were IC and it all flowed well.
I hope to see more Natsume/Tanuma from you.