If that woman even dares do something to hurt Freddie, I SWEAR-!

Oh no eve deleted all of Johnny's photos of Mavis... Luckily he could recover them with his phone on the photos app.
Nice story.

Great story. Loved it from beginning to end. If u do a sequel I'm sure it will be great as well

Love the story. Im hooked

I really enjoyed reading your story, I've been reading it for about a week during my off time this story made me enjoy having time off. I would like to see you write a sequel to this.

Indeed very good, you should give the work as a writer a try. Or are you mostly simply building up things on other persons ideas from the original movie? Well, a very great chapter, I have followed this series of chapters from the beginning, and it is just great. A little spelling mistakes, but apart from that, perfect

i am e aGenivivev

This story is amazing and I am loving it so far. Your really doing an awesome job on it. I just have one little critique. I live in California, and I thought you should know there are no cicadas or fireflies in California. Other than that your story is great!

i did not know eve was my mom sister : missmavywavy

WELL

welp

hmmmmm

did eve have her heart broken by a human

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If you make a sequel bet it would be awesome :) -cm7